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Pro. 07-03-06 08:42 PM

Mick Swagger vs Met-A-4
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 07-08-06 at 08:42 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

System 07-03-06 08:43 PM

Mick Swagger has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-06 08:43 PM.

System 07-04-06 05:04 AM

Met-A-4 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-06 05:04 AM.

Untold 07-04-06 05:43 AM

hoe, i'm untold with the flow, you a bitch on his knees
cause MS is more spineless than patients with that disease
bitch, check my steeze! but i'm blind to ya actions, nig
'n peeps is see'n ya about as much as that person in ya sig
ray charles lookin dun! i got swag 'n thats no pun
so why Jack Swagger? when its obvious that he has none
ya vlad, bitch! scratch ya shit, 'n get ill bitchin
cause if Vd's sick, then it'd explain why his balls are itchin
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vlad in Mick Swagger's sig
I'll pwn this rook,An leave this site in awe.
Cuz this is a chess match..Mine 'r manly urs fit right in a bra.

now ya twitchin, drag ya to the high point in ur place
then i'll force ya off the edge more than your word play
bitch, i'm serious! i took like 10 minutes to key this shit
but the system says we have 7200^..
..'n you'll probably need all of it!
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mick Swagger
well Im not that same dude anymore...

not the same dude???

bitch, i'm crack'n ya cap, 'n makin ya ass snap
now its obvious ya have a split personally..
..ever since i rip'd ya in two from our last match

btw sonz, its untold from rb. same guy that beat u in LLL.. thats the explanation to the closer, if ya needed one. g/l, drop soon, 'n pz.

Pro. 07-07-06 09:31 PM

Dude your wack as fuck,Your ego 's bigger than ur skill.
I'll rip ur shit to so many bits..You couldve came with a drill.
You know the deal..Like the one you'll never recieve 'n..
..Its not we're LOSIN faith in you,we havent FOUND anything to believe in.
Your not achieve'ng a vets status,So save the lungs 'n breath.
Cuz you suck'd the LIFE out concepts thats been done to DEATH.
relationships are snug...but ur's being all different in case.
Cuz thats puppy love..when ur girl looks like a dog in the face.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i mean, fuck'a free win. who wants that?

^Blah at that crap,when you come with weak drops.
Cuz you'll never win at my cost..throwin those cheap shots.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i'm untold

lol.

I smoke herbs like you daily,but its bad for the health.
its bad being a joke..but even worse when you laugh at urself.


pz.I dont know how many lines you went so...

Pro. 07-08-06 10:30 AM

btw sonz, its untold from rb. same guy that beat u in LLL.. thats the explanation to the closer, if ya needed one. g/l, drop soon, 'n pz.

^Blah@that crap...I beat you too...or u dont remember.lol.

5-1..ha.

Uppin this shit.

Untold 07-09-06 06:48 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mick Swagger
btw sonz, its untold from rb. same guy that beat u in LLL.. thats the explanation to the closer, if ya needed one. g/l, drop soon, 'n pz.

^Blah@that crap...I beat you too...or u dont remember.lol.

5-1..ha.

Uppin this shit.

chea, on a verse i didn't try on.

then i came back in the LLL and beat you. i remember, sonz! reguardless, up this shit.. lets get votes.

Sik Wit It 07-22-06 02:47 AM

Voted For: Met-A-4

hoe, i'm untold with the flow, you a bitch on his knees
cause MS is more spineless than patients with that disease
bitch, check my steeze! but i'm blind to ya actions, nig
'n peeps is see'n ya about as much as that person in ya sig
ray charles lookin dun! i got swag 'n thats no pun
so why Jack Swagger? when its obvious that he has none
now ya twitchin, drag ya to the high point in ur place
then i'll force ya off the edge more than your word play

vs

You know the deal..Like the one you'll never recieve 'n..
..Its not we're LOSIN faith in you,we havent FOUND anything to believe in.
relationships are snug...but ur's being all different in case.
Cuz thats puppy love..when ur girl looks like a dog in the face.
I smoke herbs like you daily,but its bad for the health.
its bad being a joke..but even worse when you laugh at urself.

v/ Met-A-For

Untold 07-22-06 08:01 PM

word. i appreciate the one fuck'n vote since this battles been up.

up this shit and leave links kids.

Stanza. 07-29-06 11:43 AM

Voted For: Met-A-4

...Mick...
Your punchez were not strong enough to win this battle i mean you came with str8 wordplay and it wasnt enough your punchez were weak and your syllable count was not correct on most of your lines im sorry but you didnt come very well in this battle like i expected you too that's why i couldnt give you this vote

sryy

Untold

now you know your punchez werent all what you expected but it was aii it was enough to win the battle you came some some decent personals that was followed by some punchez that were on tact so thats what gave you the edge in this battle you also used alot of wordplay and that was also good if you ask me thats why you get my vote in this battle

so my v/ untold

please rtf in my battle in my sig before Wordz try to close it wit the 21 day rule

The Creator 08-07-06 06:11 PM

Voted For: Mick Swagger

Dude your wack as fuck,Your ego 's bigger than ur skill.
I'll rip ur shit to so many bits..You couldve came with a drill.
I GET IT BUT IT'S STILL KINDA WACK

You know the deal..Like the one you'll never recieve 'n..
..Its not we're LOSIN faith in you,we havent FOUND anything to believe in.
OK LINE BUT IT WASN'T AN ACTUALL DISS.

Your not achieve'ng a vets status,So save the lungs 'n breath.
Cuz you suck'd the LIFE out concepts thats been done to DEATH.
POORLY WORDED

relationships are snug...but ur's being all different in case.
Cuz thats puppy love..when ur girl looks like a dog in the face.
WAK

Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i mean, fuck'a free win. who wants that?


^Blah at that crap,when you come with weak drops.
Cuz you'll never win at my cost..throwin those cheap shots.
WAK

Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i'm untold

lol.


I smoke herbs like you daily,but its bad for the health.
its bad being a joke..but even worse when you laugh at urself.
GOOD LINE

SOME OF YOUR LINES WAS DECENT BUT YOU HAD ONLY ONE REAL QUOTABLE LINE. YOU DIDN'T REALLY BRING ANYTHING SPECIAL OUTSIDE OF TRASH TALKING AND FILLERS. YOU SHOULD REWORD SOME OF YOUR SHIT OR SOMETHING. YOUR FLOW AND STRUCTURE IS OK BUT WORK ON YOUR CREATIVITIE MAN.


hoe, i'm untold with the flow, you a bitch on his knees
cause MS is more spineless than patients with that disease
COULD'V BEEN WORDED BETTER

bitch, check my steeze! but i'm blind to ya actions, nig
'n peeps is see'n ya about as much as that person in ya sig
KINDA WAK

ray charles lookin dun! i got swag 'n thats no pun
so why Jack Swagger? when its obvious that he has none
GOOD NAMEPLAY

ya vlad, bitch! scratch ya shit, 'n get ill bitchin
cause if Vd's sick, then it'd explain why his balls are itchin
OK LINE, ENDING WAS KINDA BAD

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vlad in Mick Swagger's sig
I'll pwn this rook,An leave this site in awe.
Cuz this is a chess match..Mine 'r manly urs fit right in a bra.


now ya twitchin, drag ya to the high point in ur place
then i'll force ya off the edge more than your word play
FILLER LINE

bitch, i'm serious! i took like 10 minutes to key this shit
but the system says we have 7200^..
..'n you'll probably need all of it!
WAK... DIDN'T RHYME AND SAYING YOU DIDN'T TRY IS PLAYED

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mick Swagger
well Im not that same dude anymore...


not the same dude???

bitch, i'm crack'n ya cap, 'n makin ya ass snap
now its obvious ya have a split personally..
..ever since i rip'd ya in two from our last match
GOOD LINE

btw sonz, its untold from rb. same guy that beat u in LLL.. thats the explanation to the closer, if ya needed one. g/l, drop soon, 'n pz.

I'LL BASICALLY GIVE THIS BATTLE HESITANTLY TO SWAG. YOU BOTH CAME REALLY WEAK ON THIS BATTLE. BOTH HAD GOOD CONCEPTS ON VERY FEW LINES BUT DIDN'T WORD EM RIGHT. IM GIVING THIS VOTE TO SWAG COZ i FELT HIS 1 QUOTABLE WAS BETTER THEN UNTOLDS 1 QUOTABLE.

V/ MICK SWAGGER

PS. NO BEEF..JUST VOTED HOW i SAW IT. PLEASE RTF IN ANY BATTLE YOU SEE ME IN WITH SOME FEED BACK. THANKS

FlowIntelligent. 08-10-06 06:09 PM

Voted For: Mick Swagger

Mick Swagger:

Dude your wack as fuck,Your ego 's bigger than ur skill.
I'll rip ur shit to so many bits..You couldve came with a drill.
^^ok opener 4/10
You know the deal..Like the one you'll never recieve 'n..
..Its not we're LOSIN faith in you,we havent FOUND anything to believe in.
^^good bar 5/10
Your not achieve'ng a vets status,So save the lungs 'n breath.
Cuz you suck'd the LIFE out concepts thats been done to DEATH.
^^ehh 3/10
relationships are snug...but ur's being all different in case.
Cuz thats puppy love..when ur girl looks like a dog in the face.
^^lol ok 5/10

Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i mean, fuck'a free win. who wants that?


^Blah at that crap,when you come with weak drops.
Cuz you'll never win at my cost..throwin those cheap shots.
^^ok bar 5/10
Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i'm untold

lol.


I smoke herbs like you daily,but its bad for the health.
its bad being a joke..but even worse when you laugh at urself.
^^no 2/10

Overall: 24/60 (40%)


Met-A-4:

hoe, i'm untold with the flow, you a bitch on his knees
cause MS is more spineless than patients with that disease
^^ehh 3/10
bitch, check my steeze! but i'm blind to ya actions, nig
'n peeps is see'n ya about as much as that person in ya sig
^^wack personal 2/10
ray charles lookin dun! i got swag 'n thats no pun
so why Jack Swagger? when its obvious that he has none
^^wtf 1/10
ya vlad, bitch! scratch ya shit, 'n get ill bitchin
cause if Vd's sick, then it'd explain why his balls are itchin
^^ehh 3/10

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vlad in Mick Swagger's sig
I'll pwn this rook,An leave this site in awe.
Cuz this is a chess match..Mine 'r manly urs fit right in a bra.


now ya twitchin, drag ya to the high point in ur place
then i'll force ya off the edge more than your word play
^^ok 4/10
bitch, i'm serious! i took like 10 minutes to key this shit
but the system says we have 7200^..
..'n you'll probably need all of it!
^^ok 4/10
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mick Swagger
well Im not that same dude anymore...


not the same dude???

bitch, i'm crack'n ya cap, 'n makin ya ass snap
now its obvious ya have a split personally..
..ever since i rip'd ya in two from our last match
^^no 2/10

Overall: 19/70 (27%)


Vote: Mick Swagger

rexless 08-14-06 01:57 PM

Voted For: Mick Swagger

IP:


hoe, i'm untold with the flow, you a bitch on his knees
cause MS is more spineless than patients with that disease
bitch, check my steeze! but i'm blind to ya actions, nig
'n peeps is see'n ya about as much as that person in ya sig
ray charles lookin dun! i got swag 'n thats no pun
so why Jack Swagger? when its obvious that he has none
ya vlad, bitch! scratch ya shit, 'n get ill bitchin
cause if Vd's sick, then it'd explain why his balls are itchin

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vlad in Mick Swagger's sig
I'll pwn this rook,An leave this site in awe.
Cuz this is a chess match..Mine 'r manly urs fit right in a bra.


now ya twitchin, drag ya to the high point in ur place
then i'll force ya off the edge more than your word play
bitch, i'm serious! i took like 10 minutes to key this shit
but the system says we have 7200^..
..'n you'll probably need all of it!

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mick Swagger
well Im not that same dude anymore...


not the same dude???

bitch, i'm crack'n ya cap, 'n makin ya ass snap
now its obvious ya have a split personally..
..ever since i rip'd ya in two from our last match


vs


Dude your wack as fuck,Your ego 's bigger than ur skill.
I'll rip ur shit to so many bits..You couldve came with a drill.
You know the deal..Like the one you'll never recieve 'n..
..Its not we're LOSIN faith in you,we havent FOUND anything to believe in.
Your not achieve'ng a vets status,So save the lungs 'n breath.
Cuz you suck'd the LIFE out concepts thats been done to DEATH.
relationships are snug...but ur's being all different in case.
Cuz thats puppy love..when ur girl looks like a dog in the face.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i mean, fuck'a free win. who wants that?


^Blah at that crap,when you come with weak drops.
Cuz you'll never win at my cost..throwin those cheap shots.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Met-A-4
i'm untold

lol.


I smoke herbs like you daily,but its bad for the health.
its bad being a joke..but even worse when you laugh at urself.

vpte: mike swagger
i thought the first bar was tight lol, u'r whole verse was had better punches that connected better and i thought was more raw....


RTF....


nice battle thou...

Pro. 08-20-06 05:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Untold
chea, on a verse i didn't try on.

then i came back in the LLL and beat you. i remember, sonz! reguardless, up this shit.. lets get votes.


lol.w/e....

I didnt really try here...Lmao!!!..but I'll see u again in the LLL's..uppin this beeech!!!


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