Kontroverzy - Don't Turn Around ( Sick StoryLine)
 

uppin like an erection...

^^^ nasty

beat is decent....... kinda repetitive..... actually really repetitive right now....... im actually waitin for u to start..... its been a minute almost now...... ummmmm are my headfones just not workin??? cuz now its the hook and u havent sed shit yet...... yup, still just the beat..... ahhhhhh, ive heard of lettin the beat play alil before u start, but this shit is ridick.....

my bad i updated it now.

Nice beat.. storyline was pretty nice, had to listenin to it twice though.

I liked the lil hook wit the "dont lalala" or w/e it was, lmao. But um.. shit was nice though. Flowed nicely.. and the quality was good.

Good shit yo.. I liked it.

thanx b...i appreciate it...could u understand everything clearly?

Yea, I could...

aiiight koo. appreciate the feedback. Uppin. lets get this forum active

and i said...DONT TURN AROUND

Ai forver...uppin this doe..

Decent track duke, quality was good and the vocals were clear though i'm not a big big fan of your voice...or story tracks. I can't really say shit to either cause the best track i ever did was a story track and i hate my voice......this was a good track like, plot wise but nothing i would ever bump on a repeat basis ya know. If this was common's cd this track would be faithful, not the song you jump to but it's good to listen to if youre just playin the cd thru, i wouldn't skip it.

7.5/10 I'll be back with a link i guess

word. thanx famz. appreciate the feedback

Playing...

beats cool..flows on. lyrics are simple,but some what have some meaning behind them, so yeh..no need for too much vocab.
Dubs are good.
hooks cool worked well for this track.
track is very simple though,nice twist to the storyline,but entire thing is on the simple tip.

But word up, its cool.

word. respect on the feed....

Listenin', beat is hot..intro is good..qual is decent..this on that real tip im definitely feelin it..delivery is as usual fam no problems.l.emotion is dope on this..some pronounciation problems..I like how u got into the first hook from the last word of the first verse..2nd verse has a better delivery and flow fo real..you sound alot more comfortable..haha damn at the end niceee twist haha im feelin dat ayo ima rewind dat nice shit nigga we good homie good track..

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can you rtf?