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Power Of Creativity
Yo Now since this whole discussion is about use'n ya mind/ Lemme take the time........................to excercise mine/ Only the things you been through is what you gotta spit/ But isnt that take'n away from what makes Hip Hop the shit/ Creativity, a lost cause lost upon the ones who keep it real/ But I'm express'n my thoughts, yea, tell'n u how i feel/ I take a pen n let the ink spill into my pad/ But thats doesnt mean the shit i brag about is the shit i already have/ Yea i can tell you a story but it aint gotta be the truth/ As long as i'm sick wit the shit inbetween i aint can say what i feel in the booth/ |
this is good poetry but to change this to rap you have to make it first person listen
abuse rhymes when i use my mind in discussions// I'm straight ascinine but let me take the time to explain this complex and lame situation // now flowing corrupt but when i was growing up I saw raw flaws didn't obey the laws eighter// |
lol thnx for da feed man i really appreciate it, thnx for da cypher to
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this was ehh, your rhymes were rather basic, and not really creative. maybe take some more time in ut next drop n polish it up.
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