Revelations(Will return the favors)
 

yup i made it to this lil studio of a dude that I know
hope you enjoy it, peace


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4153414



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231083
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2786685

heree we gooooo

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*lmao*

whoa i downloaded this beat and i was gonna use it soon..u fast ass..


Hook : i like it..something cool u cud jam to when u tipsy and stuff..maybe on ur way to the club..lol


Verses : lyrics r decent..yeah..i love ur flow on the second verse..got me nodding..ur presence was there but its like u voice was a lil low...quality aint like the others i've heard from u..but still nice...

Overall : yes i liked it..decent job as usual:thumbup:

keep doing ur thang!

thanks alot.;..

ide say someone has improved a bit decent shit ova here hook was ok nuthing major but overall decent verses was aight im waiting for something to POPout and stand out tho but u definately doing a spell betta rtf erbircs ft tonyself tito

thx i will today

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it surprises me how you naturally get slept on.lol.

beats club,hooks sounds heavy metal style. This is the quickest ive heard you spit.quality is good, mixing is good.
Flows is off and on due to the speed,speed is ridding of emotion.. like when you said "when writing this i was fucking shaking" That could of had alot more impact.
Hook again its cool,but reminds me of a heavy metal track.
Next verse, speed is cool,but at times you sound like your tryna quickly force each bar out.
lol this hook has your french accent apparent like crazy.
Outros cool.


Good track bro.

Listenin' beat is fuckin' crazy I need to get at this..yeah I agree with YsDat, the hook is on the metal shit I like it...woah, flow is real nice fam...pronounciation gettin better...story is decent..emotion could be much better..hook is actually mad catchy u a beast with the hook...(who helped u with ure quality hehe lol) I like ure fast flow...im definitely feelin' this track like crazy..**downloads**

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...648#post2788648

can you rtf plz

word thanks.....

I like omega beats

vocals on the hook were decent, but cud be de-amped .8-1.0 decibel


flow is fine...voice sounds coo

Need more breath control

did you just say "frickin shakin" ? lol...aiight now


slick soundin track bruh

Keep at it


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