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KempoMRK 07-09-06 10:19 AM

23. Raw King (2-5) vs 24. Ace Heratoga (4-1)
 


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The Creator 07-09-06 02:37 PM

Im a drop in like 2 or 3 days dawg. lets go 16 for this one.

Ace Heratoga 07-09-06 02:56 PM

1 5 c h a r e c t e r s c a n s u c k m y d i c k

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231345

The Creator 07-09-06 03:01 PM

lol....so u down for the 16 later or do u wanna just drop right now since we both online?

The Creator 07-12-06 02:26 AM

u claiming the win is heresy, that makes u hard to respect
u couldnt be an Ace if I folded, while u had every card on the deck
I'll break u in half and put u at piece(s) wit earth, like If I prayed to buddha
ur whole style is still last and weak,(last week) so u can re-live that K.O. from shake zula
nigga, understand u hardly a man, I'll bring out the bitch in ur possie
cuz I'll cave ur chest in deep, like Zidane did Materazzi(lol)
the roof is on fire, so u can't elevate on ur own
and I'll spark a philly up......by setting flames to ur home
u aint in the zone...u struck out, but me, Im too raw
they expect me to lose like Im a follow ur footsteps......even though the shoes are too small
and ur style is old as fuck, like my link to my battle with kings
u would quote my whole verse, Im so ill, it probably would actually help u win
cuz u unimportant to this site, like spinners on 12 inches
u could start ur own crew and ud probably still hesitate to put urself in it
so get off my dick, befor I put u on T.O.P. of the bridge
and let god judge u while I give him back what evers left of his rib

If u aint get that last punch...Im calling him a female cuz according to the bible, they came from that one nigga adams ribs and shit. oh, and the predictions here suck.lol

no beefing dawg...uppin for ur verse ace.

The Creator 07-13-06 03:11 AM

...........U gonna drop?...........

Ace Heratoga 07-13-06 08:28 PM

easy bro... its summer time i've been chasing tang... i am droppin but its gonna be close to the deadline... sorry for the delay... imma edit this with my verse

The Creator 07-13-06 08:34 PM

as long as it aint pass the deadline then Im cool wit it. just dont spit no prewritten shit or something that u may have been working on for like a week or some shit man.

Ace Heratoga 07-13-06 08:50 PM

lol s'gravey im finna start workin on it in a bit... im hopin in thes hower smokin a L and shit... ill amke the dead line homie

The Creator 07-13-06 08:53 PM

kewl, do ya thing dawg

Ace Heratoga 07-13-06 10:21 PM

You beat real Talk, ok great… nah im sorry but that’s funny
Phryme nice, but the rest of your battles…u lost to NOBODIES
Kid you a pussy… so you better grow some nuts dawg
My bars leave you incarcerated…
No protection? I garuntee You’ll be getting fucked Raw
If anyone got a taste for him I got Precise aim for these fiends
To kill competition I keep it like d-12… rely on m16’s
I got a lot to do this week kid… I kinda live a wild life
So thanks kemp…
for giving me the only kid to make J bee look nice
Dwag I listened to ya tracks… had to turn it off punk
Cause honestly…
I don’t wanna hear you whine when its supposed to be krunk
You been textin for too long, its all about punch lines ho….
Fuck flow… but wait when you spit it counts for a LOT though
Ya shit’s played mang… punches… style all been weak
I keep it original…
you the first king to be beheaded since Louis the XVI (Sixteenth)
Don’t pre write? Or use somethin I been workin on for weeks?
how the fuck can I do that? I ain’t heard of you since before this week

and yea not EZ... it was just Easy

The Creator 07-13-06 10:56 PM

str8 verse ace. no beef dawg...its just a battle cuh...uppin for some votes. Im a drop my links in a bit...I would have befor but aint nobody really drop anything yet.

So.Rell 07-13-06 11:58 PM

I'll break u in half and put u at piece(s) wit earth, like If I prayed to buddha
ur whole style is still last and weak,(last week) so u can re-live that K.O. from shake zula

vs.

Kid you a pussy… so you better grow some nuts dawg
My bars leave you incarcerated…
No protection? I garuntee You’ll be getting fucked Raw
If anyone got a taste for him I got Precise aim for these fiends
To kill competition I keep it like d-12… rely on m16’s
I got a lot to do this week kid… I kinda live a wild life
So thanks kemp…
for giving me the only kid to make J bee look nice

Well Raw you seem to have some wording problems stretchin you lines too...Try to sum it up get to the point, That's really all that was flawed and a few weak concepts. Ace pretty nice, had it's down point the opener could've been better the m16 line was DOPE...

Vote - Ace

The Creator 07-14-06 01:18 AM

can people in the same crew vote for each other on LBL?

Ace Heratoga 07-14-06 03:55 PM

/\/\ 1 i've never heard of it not being allowed and 2... its an honest vote... So Rell and I have voted against each other in previous battles...


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