Tony Green "3 For The 10"
 

New track trynna do me check it out....

"3 For The 10"


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231302
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230901

uppin fo feed....

Playing.........

beats sounds like its clipping, maybe hard limit the beat. Just bass lines clips all muffled.

Vocals are ok quality, but that beat is fucking this track up. Flows a bit spoken at times, but yeh mostly its on.
Lyrics arent anything great, very simple.
Hook should be alot more hyped, its too dull for a hook.
second verse comes in cool, sounds better cause that bass line isnt sounding muffled and fucked up. flow is off and on in this verse aswell.


Ok track.
RTF hit up - ready for war-

Listenin', beat i heard alot..nice choice..intro I cant hear what you sying..

Vocals are WAY too low...sounds like yall jus whispering lightly..which makes delivery and presence way low too...I can tell flow is nice and I can tell you have a lil energy..so talk louder..get the confidence up..turn yourself up...

You can't hear much all I rlly heard was that puff line...mosta the shit was not hearable..

Hook is not good, like ysdat said not atall hyped, ure verse gotta be much more hyped...

Things to work on:

- Delivery
- Presence
- Emotion
- Flow (not as much)
- Energy
- Mixing

keep up..

RTF on this:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231386

uppin to the top

uppin to the top

beat is coo, if not generic

flow is acceptable, but nothing major

lyrics are ok, if unassuming

hook is decent, if not drone

vocals seem to be mixed decently...nothing bad here

decent drop bro...just up the basic elements...maybe rap about something that means something...

Ur not bad


1

thanxx alot upping

*listening*


beat is cool but seems like the bass,h/e its called, was too high..

ur vocals...ummm a lil too low


presence was like plane...


quality?..ummm nah i cudnt understand what u said all thru fo real...the only thing i cud catch was the hook,which was quite nice, 3 for the 10(which i almost thought was 'teen')...lol

u flow was steady and cool tho...


y not..i wud listen to this again!


hit my 'dear dad'


Thanx

iight good lookin uppin