The See Thru Kid
 

Replied To Holla @ Me

and Confessional...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231491

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231235

THE SEE THRU KID

Story Track .. Pay Attention

CLICK THE SIG ... "GOT FENDI?"

ansane...ya

beat is upbeat

ur flow works here...but, ur vocals sound a tad compressed

the screwed doubles sounded ehh...

lyrics seem personal or from experience...not bad there

rhymin gets hot at the end

good drop


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I like ur melody on the intro

the beat of course is hot its Ansane

your flow is good.....and ur lyrics are tight

the only thing that you'd need is a better mic and you'd be pretty damn dope and more enjoyable too listen too........the hook melody is good.....this aint too bad tho.....i'm feelin the joint

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can you return the favor - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231504

^^ appreciate the feed... workin on the better mic situation too ...

hmm...


i like the hook...its something i cud sing with ease and its pretty melodic..u got a nice flow but it wasnt steady cos after the second verse the hooks were off (it wasnt balanced on the beat's tempo)u need to up ur quality n delivery( i cud barely get what u saying)..so i aint gonna talk on the lyrics...

overall this was a decent job yeah!