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Always On My Mind(HOT)
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4175864
A song I just put together today and mixed all today.....i havent been able too do anythin 4 a while this is too that girl i been talkin about.....leave feed and i'll return the favor IF YOU LEAVE LINKS Links ------------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231491 ======= http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231386 |
Sounds kinda like it should have 50 singin on it
this shit was fly tho...sound like sumtin 4 the radio u should put chris brown and 50 cent on the remix lol...but i was feelin it tho i aint really up on the cheesey love trax but shit was tight bro |
word up thanks a lot.i'mma have the singer/co-owner of my label sing on it....and yeah...i'll post that up on it......i'd def wanna get them up on this..that'd be easy money
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WORD!!!
*listens again* Beats dope as fuck,real smooth.... Verse 1 Feeling the flow man,deliverys dope as fuck fits the track so well,jus blends with the beat...feeling your singing bits gives it a lil edge,lyrics are real mainstream...could see this on the radio.....presence is crazy,seem so in tune with the beat,real nice....feelin this Hooks nice,catchy.............. Verse 2 Even better,feelin the lyrics more,flows better,damn,its dope.....really feelin this track...jus like verse 1 but more amped... Hook.... Verse 3 Word!!!!!..flows dope,i like the way you present your voice in this verse mostly,lotta versatility in your tone,makes it more intereseting...deliverys crazy as well as gthe presence,nice! Hook........ Outro Dope track,could see this on the radio man!!! RTF Here Please:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231538 |
beat is good
the intro was kind of cheesy...but, it was heartfelt flow is good delivery matched the tone of the track Hook was good, but would sound better mixed to really set it off from the verses nice track 1 |
uppin this up once
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Uppin This Shit
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haha...i used this beat.....but i liked how you did your thing on it...
you got good emotion.....damn good lyrics..i can feel your getting your message across on this track.... you really did it up on this track man... 8/10...damn good track...damn good...i'd like to collab some day |
aight good looks everyone
i'mma up this one more time |
intro is coo
i dunno if i like the OOONN MMYYY MIIINNNDD deal i think u should maybe mellowed out the "singing" part...and maybe added a few more stacks to it....and maybe some delay on the stacks...prolly woulda sounded better verses are coo....delivery is pretty nice...fits the topic and beat pretty well..quality is really nice..... nothin much else to say man...just that 1 lil thing i think coulda made it a bit more enjoyable to listen to.. |
OMFG after Shear i decided to use this beat again :mad::mad:
mayne wtf! I DONT LIKE THE BEAT :mad: lol..nah mayne its nice! ur verses have nice flows right on point mayne...the lyrics made sense yeah..yeah creative enuff... lmao..dude dont sing mayne!...when u said mind' it was so outta tune..lol but anyways nice...shiii u shud have asked me to sing for u..lol anyways nice track here... like i said in shears thread..i'm liking this but i'm hating it:mad: hahaha Outro-'i wanna say i'm sorry...' ..............iight i forgive you,you always on mah miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiind :thumbup: -Wun- |
Listenin', oh word yeah Im usin this beat but its gon be dedicated to the single mothers...
Anyways, intro is nice...youre flow is fine here throughout this whole track..never fell off once... Delivery is perfect too.. The only flow I can find is the hook..I think it cuda done a lil better, but still catchy... Lyrics are radio friendly and mainstream suitable...would make a good lil video too.. Sumin' for the ladies here, im definitely feelin thsi PT...emotion is working too...you had a melody during the song...which made it even more radio friendly.. Actually im growin' fonder to tha hook..so props.. Nothin but compliments.. 1 |
word up thanks for all the feed peeps
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ok...intro was a nice lead...opened wit a good flow...delivery fits subject matter a beat...vocals is low tho...hook...hook is koo...u need to mix the"you always on my mind" diff...make it softer an have a wet, echoed sound, the roughness of it takes away from hook...but damn this beat is a BEAST!....you cant sing for shit but u trying like a mufucka..lmao...but it wasn't bad u jsu needed to layer it more..if u had layed it wit sum whispers an panned them an spit the main vocal on hook softer OHHHH MAN that hook woulda been infectious...but all in all this was good son..shawties gon like it kid..lyrics was nothign spectacular but this aint a track where that matters....good shit.
RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231691 |
lol word up
aight well like i've said before I'm havin someone get on the hook and sing on it in the backround and this dude can sing pretty damn good |
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