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tornado220 07-12-06 06:42 PM

Wreck the fate of fools and decorate schools with knowledge
 
Wreck the fate of fools and decorate schools with knowledge
Change the teachers I’ve met strange preachers and other garbage
You have derange features such as bad rhymes some sad grime
Get the Ajax and scrub and rub try clean them, its about time
To route your mind to concerned realness stuff all ascinine
I run in South Central with sound fundamentals some cats
Think guns are essential for respect, better check yourself and stats
Wears a new sweater and true leather together just
To produce my dress code test loads of cats and bust
Them on microphones what the fuck going on in here?
My group is large even troops dodge us they fear
To combat in our habitat we will grab the gatts
And shoot off hats and pollute your stats where you at?
My art clean like parts of machines never sleazy just forever greasy
But clever and easy to read, my rhymes rule and design schools
Like architects and it marched correct in grammar this not for fools
Even builds ill institutions for religion give solution with precision
My concepts lame but they help the brain like psychology improve
Behavior then cats can make moves major it’s that entomology groove
My gravity is specific but now got a cavity terrific ouch1 it’s a menace
Must see a dentist

AkHiLeEz_SkYLL 07-12-06 07:09 PM

Gah. You're the illest.

tornado220 07-16-06 07:18 PM

AkHiLeEz_SkYLL THANKS FOR TH EPROPS ON THIS FOR REAL

tornado220 07-16-06 07:25 PM

MY LINK (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2795153)

MY LINK(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231460)

Dickard. 07-17-06 01:43 PM

You wrote this as if it was an audio or some shit.

if your going to do a text....make it flow better...structurize it to match ur flow.
don't just look up words in the dictionary and put them in ur pieces to make u look like you use big vocab because its noticeable when you do it.
not bad...have some good multies yet some are just forced and not needed.

this is written as if u were going to record it..not just let it dry in text u know what i mean?

keep at it..ive seen worse


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