Bang Bang By Tony Green
 

Bang Bang

Trynna keep it gangsta you know

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231604
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=231386&page=1

i lke the beat...that young buck huh....TENNESSEE!!!!
but here we goo....you got a nice flow and all..but i can't really har what your saying that much...like i can't understand it...i think the vocals are a little low..
the hoook is cool....i like it...

this is a nice track...just need to work on eqs and quality.....your voiceovers too.....

get all that and you got yourself a prize track man.......keep droppin and poppin....

5.5/10...my final score on this track

iight thanxx mayne uppin

Aight

beats nice

Your flows koo man,but it seems muffled,iunno your qualitys kinda whack,need to step that up,from what i can hear it sounds koo...delivery needs a lil work will come with time yo....emotion is koo,lyrics are nice,jus up the qaulity and your set man..Hooks catchy tho:)

can you RTF on "White Boyz Are Gankkksta"

fo sho boss.....

listening....

bang bang beat...

ya got a smooth laid back style.... i hear the extra noise from ya mic tho, do a noise reduction on that.....verse is straight tho..... dont talk to much on the hook....hook straight....kinda like the orginal.....2nd verse....get ya adlibs matched and it will sound smoother....2nd verse is pretty nice too.... overall this joint is straight... id say drop some money on gettin a better set up tho so ur quality is cleaner.....
*they already know*

like your voice, like your flow, its different pretty dope, your voice fits to the beat, quality isnt that bad, i taught it was good in a way, your adlibs are kinda bad, like trying to rap a second time, try to be more on timing, but i like when you say like " yeah, hu-huh" and all, good track serioiusly

thanxx folks good lookin

Nice...Nice...got a lot of ups and downs tho..

Half and Half ya voice was coo...that's seem like ya only problem that I hear so far..voices and eq and shit...
didnt really hear tha lyrics that much, but tha pieces that i did hear, it was too much gun talk in my opinion...
i doubted you b4 this track tho, cause alot of RV niggas drop trashy songs with expensive equipment.Keep it str8 hood tho, then move up like the jeffersons. yadidimean!??!

but, it was coo...work on tha lyrical content...too much gun talk.
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH...what was this shit in tha lyrics bout "bow wow, chris brown, mike jones...they can get it"

lol...whats all that about...eh...whatever...keep doin you...

TG to tha Eazy

YEE!

yeah boss threw the cheap shots in too