Konvict feat. Ob.Session - It's Alright
 

www.soundclick.com/konthamvp

Concept: Dedicated to all the single mothers out there, it's a story which gives the moral that even without a father by your side a mother can get you through, it's the power of the woman, real talk....also dedicated to my step mother who raised me by myself, my father was present from time to time but 90 percent not there, so ya' know..

ansane!...argggg


vocals are mixed well


beat is good

chorus is under-produced and under-mixed

singing itself isn't bad

flow is consistent

lyrics were adequate...no real quotables...but, you get your point across


decent track bro


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Thanks fam.........

feelin intro of the beat

...beats cool...kick in nicely flows cool...delivery is nice...you've elevated heaps man...i like the concept behind this...i jus hope im not EVER gonna be that type of father to my son...but ye man i was raised by my mother for a while my old man only got into the scene REALLY as i started to get older...

but ye 2nd verse...rhyme scheme is cool man you flowin nicely...lyrics are deep...comin from the heart...

quality is ok vocals i think could be upped SLIGHTLY...hooks cool...

but ye all in all dope track

RTF in ma sig

keep droppin :thumbup:

Thanks G........

Waddup Konvict.......shit's nice...beat's sick cuz i mean it's Ansane.....feelin this man...da concept is nice and like ya imagery too man.....lyrics is strate too...flow and all that is fine.....yo man you stepped ya game up......but only thing i can critique is that tha hook she hitten some flat notes man....i mean maybe it's me but hey i played an instrument for bout 13 years....lol aiite man dope track.......

pz

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