Oz. vs CherryBluntZ
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-27-06 at 11:46 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed.. did not drop 10 lines as stated in the rules

CherryBluntZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-24-06 11:47 PM.

Oz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-06 12:54 PM.

Yall Sit And Watch Me "Smoke CherryBluntz" Like It's "For the Occasion"
Nigga Only Has One and a Lost To Match....He Must've Went On Vacation
Man U couldnt "Overcome" me even If you "fucked 5 Girls" To my One
And We'll See just How Strong Your Punchez are To My Gun
Yo Ass must Be in Your Throat Bcuz U Always Talkin Shit
Even If you Put My "Drool In a bottle" You Still couldnt "Top My Spitz"
Ill "Knock Out Your Brain" and Give Your Dumb Ass "Mental Spaces"
He Mad Bcuz People Read My Verse and Sleep On His Like Pillow Cases
He Takes Little bites off other ppl'z Verses and Calls it a mixed bag
The Rules Strictly Said No recycling So why is he comin wit Dat Trash

Done

Ayo this kid talkin like he kno about drugs and weed//
Please i roll single bluntz wit OZ.S//
this goof troop is gunna crack up wen his tastes DIS-KNEE (disney)//
make his piss bleed by stompin on this pricks kidneys//
an yeaa i spitt evil cus wit me, writin out math questions is the only time this boy can be equal//
for suuure im gunna beat u/
so jus stop spittin now bro before i turn this battle into domestic violence and really start hittin hoes//
ya written flows gunna be whack, so watch as C~B gonna shatter ya reflection like fuckin usher videos//

i dont even need tha min. ta beat this punk, im out 6~3~1 all day

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

do i even need to say it?????????PLZ TRELL ME PLZ CAUZE I WOULD LIKE TO KNO! cherry hurt this kid bahhh

Damn the way you talk made me think you was somebody wtf kinda vote was that you wack man and I could easily get you DQ'ed for not goin by the rules but ima embarass yo ass when the REAL votes come on not somebody you paid to vote for your ass lol

You wack

...................................Man you gonna lose i know that yall nigz from the 631 be voting for each other and i bet before tommorow comes yo ass will have a lost on that record .........................watch

Voted For: Oz.

CherryBluntZ learn to follow the rulez. Im choosing to DQ your verse because you were too lazy to go atleast 10 lines.

Yall Sit And Watch Me "Smoke CherryBluntz" Like It's "For the Occasion"
Nigga Only Has One and a Lost To Match....He Must've Went On Vacation
DIDN'T REALLY LIKE THESE LINES FOR AN OPEN, FIRST LINE WAS OK THOUGH

Man U couldnt "Overcome" me even If you "fucked 5 Girls" To my One
And We'll See just How Strong Your Punchez are To My Gun
2ND LINE WAS GUNPLAY TALK WHICH ISN'T GOOD FOR TEXT BATTLE COZ ITS BEEN PLAYED SINCE DAY ONE. 1ST LINE WAS OK AGAIN.

Yo Ass must Be in Your Throat Bcuz U Always Talkin Shit
Even If you Put My "Drool In a bottle" You Still couldnt "Top My Spitz"
DECENT BUT IT'S NOT WORDED RIGHT

Ill "Knock Out Your Brain" and Give Your Dumb Ass "Mental Spaces"
He Mad Bcuz People Read My Verse and Sleep On His Like Pillow Cases
BEST LINES SO FAR. OK.
He Takes Little bites off other ppl'z Verses and Calls it a mixed bag
The Rules Strictly Said No recycling So why is he comin wit Dat Trash
COULD HAVE BEEN WORDED A LOT BETTER.

Oz. you came kinda weak but Candycoatedbluntz had no structure or flow at all, and he didnt meet the minimum requirments. Since he didn't put the time to drop atleast 10 lines. I wont even put the time to write about it or even concider droping feed for it. Oz. Your structure and flow is ok but you just need to focuse a lot more on making your punches and wordplays more creative. you got potencial but stuff like gunplay and simple punches aint gonna help you much man.

Structure - Oz.
Punches - Oz.
Metaphores - none
Wordplay - Oz.
Flow - Oz.

V/ Oz.

Voted For: Oz.

Cherrybluntz-gotta update ya style....you had some okay content..but as for the structure no one on this site will vote for you becuz its whack/played out and not usefull...so just enhance it and read other ppls shit and catch on ...no hate...you had like 1 good attempt for a punch...gutta step up..overall....3/10

oz.-You had some good stuff...lines a bit stretched but nothing to bad...you had a couple noticable lines that ill mention...good punches here and there...still seein some whack wordplay...but some of it was good overall you took this easily no doubg 5/10

Yo Ass must Be in Your Throat Bcuz U Always Talkin Shit
Even If you Put My "Drool In a bottle" You Still couldnt "Top My Spitz"
Ill "Knock Out Your Brain" and Give Your Dumb Ass "Mental Spaces"
He Mad Bcuz People Read My Verse and Sleep On His Like Pillow Cases

vs.

nothing


v/oz.

rtf in sig please...thanks.