Ca'lam - Rite where you stand (freeverse)
 

had an itch to spit something to this beat.

www.soundclick.com/calam


Lately been tryna find out what i wanna sound like. not exactly sure what i want my style to be.

Leave me some real feedback, cause i need it.

and leave a link so i can hit you back


links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...623&postcount=9
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...732&postcount=2

You come in nice but I notice you quickly end up sounding bored in a way. Your flow is slick as ever but this track just lacks that umph that I'm used to you giving, it might be the like of dubs or something. Your lyrics are pretty good but nothing that stood out in particular which is what I realized you gotta go for so people spread the word like, "Oh shit Ca'lam said ________!!" but instead this is more of a "Ca'lam droped another track, it's iight.", feel me? Keep it up though, I'll PM you a link someday lol.

^ thank you. thats a real feed. yea i know what you mean.

im tryna work on my lyrics, cause im not a punchline artist, but i wanna coem off real ya know ?.

like when im spittin, people like "ayo thas real shit haha. i do that to"

or

"ay he just spit his life yo"

yahmean?

but good ear. hit me with a link or something so i can return the favor bruh.

uppin i guess

saw the name. knew it would be this beat. I actually like it. I couldn't spit to this. but i like this beat.

Woo the quality is fuckin Mint. I like this. For sure Rv radio material. Hot shit yo. The punches and meta's in this shit were dangerous. and the flow was hot. and your on my tip. One verse then you say you'll do it later. THEN you never get around too it. LMfao word. but hot track though im likin this alot

8.9/10

good look yo ^.. word up to rv radio :)..


drop ya links

Added.

You should hit the thread up and vote!! *angry face*

yeah dat was straight
i like the intro thats wat
caught my eyes
but within 10 secs, started
losing instrest

^ word.


up

It's your inflection. It used to be the best thing about your verses in my opinion. Fuck the flow, lyrics, whatever......your inflection is what used to keep me listening. I liked those other things I mentioned in this song, but the lack of your usual killer inflection made this just another track in my eyes man.....

My suggestion.....go find your inflection and do a collab with Tito Bronsky cause you two would sound sick together :thumbup:



PS....make sure you leave me a verse too ;)


*EDIT*

I just re-read this and realized it sounded like I was shitting on your track......don't get it twisted, it was still better than 95% of the songs on here, I just thought you'd like to get something out of this more than a "Yo, that shit was dope son! Mad FlaVa aNd sHiT On ThE RiZzeaL :shoot:"

word up^ so put my calamemotion into it lol ?

:O I want that beat!

BTW: Shit was fire...... 10/10 no doubt........................................

the new kid in oyd...ha first time sitting down listing to you.....

lyrics were on some simple shit, but you have a smooth presence on the mic...i got a song i want you on already...haha, word get at me for that, but this verse is pretty good, great mixtape stuff.....beat is okay....not too much to my liking but still good....you could up your quality a bit too....good shit tho....a solid verse


return the favor on "myspace girls"

good looking i gotchu on that ^..

by the way i love Panic! :D