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GKillaz05 07-26-06 06:03 PM

GKillaz05 vs Wordz Ahgod
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-26-06 at 06:33 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - win

System 07-26-06 06:05 PM

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-06 06:05 PM.

GKillaz05 07-26-06 06:10 PM

Wordz ahGod my advice for you in this battle is STAY OUT
dude can't tell I'm above him, like this was Anne Frank's house
you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
GK is a monster kid, fags on pins & needles puttin out his best work
I'm pushing ur buttons while u trying to sew em back to ur dress shirt
I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch'

System 07-26-06 06:16 PM

Wordz Ahgod has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-06 06:16 PM.

Wordz AhGod 07-26-06 06:32 PM

I battle against legends who would merk you more then twice recent
If you battling legends. . .
. . . It'll be the legend of you actually drop'n something nice or decent
In other words, in a text battle, Gs'. . . I still murder em'
I would drop more personals . . .
. . . but honestly, him being wack is all I really heard of em'
so I'll make G switch his flow like you pee'ing on seats with plastic covers
the only time you killing G's. . .
. . . Is probably while you fags are inside each other
'Coz man, Your whole style is outdated, lyricaly you still a bitch
you been here since 04 repping 05, Coz you getting murdered on the 6th
you aint the 1 -2 champ, but you can get knocked by a pro
So understand you not original. . .
. . . I checked, he logg'd off a few minutes ago

GKillaz05 07-26-06 06:39 PM

word, good battle.. uppin..................

Speats 07-26-06 06:46 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

G'Killaz: okay your shit was decent, really nice, damn funny lines like this one

"and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses

Structure wasint that bad, it was pretty good
Flow was not bad, could be better,sometimes it dosint work, but some lines does
good drop

Wordz Ahgod:
Mmmm i dunno man, it was good, but not enought to beat G'Killaz, the structure was bad so as the flow,punch's were weak, i dont know man, just wasint feeling it, flow was off

this vote goes too G'Killaz

better not hear you say that im a dickrider, im just an honest voter

Wordz AhGod 07-26-06 08:27 PM

wtf? why would I say you dick rider? Im not 12 man. thanks for the vote and feed dawg.

I rushed the last bar coz I was at work. 1

Go0niez FuKCaz 07-26-06 09:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Wordz Ahgod
 
aight battle....................................chea

Wordz AhGod 07-27-06 11:07 AM

uppin for votes...............

Stanza. 07-27-06 01:04 PM

Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

Gkilla
Wordz ahGod my advice for you in this battle is STAY OUT
dude can't tell I'm above him, like this was Anne Frank's house
..........nice wordplay..........
you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
............LOL nice punch and terrific wordplay....
GK is a monster kid, fags on pins & needles puttin out his best work
I'm pushing ur buttons while u trying to sew em back to ur dress shirt
.....so..so.............
I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
......weak.....
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch'
....Good...

overall your lines were good and your punchez were on this was a good battle and hard to decide i liked your wordplay but its like you came hard in the begining and then you slacked off near the end I think thats what cost you my vote dont take it personal jus a thought

Wordz Ahgod

im not gonna breakdown your verse you know that your verse was kinda sloppy with the lines and I dint feel like dealing with them lines .......................overall though your punchez were constans and strong and I think thats what gave you the edge in this battle you came strong all the way and you held it and you toke it al the way /.................

my v/ goes to Wordz

please RTF in a battle link in my sig in 24 hrs or lesss or this vote will get removed

CherryBluntZ 07-27-06 03:49 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Yo im votin for GK, i aint got no loong ass explanation or nothin i jus think his punches r betta, more creative an shitt. I like how Wordz lines were put togtha but i think u workin more on tryin ta flow fancy then on ya punches. 6~3~1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Dickard. 07-27-06 06:48 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Wordz ahgod-You came weak brah...no hate but i just wasnt feeling your flow/punches/personals....your set up was a diff. approach from wat i read from you before i believe...but it just didnt piece together..it seemed u were in a writers block or had a lack of punches on ur mind....gotta stay up and fresh...once again no hate...
overall 4.5/10

G.K.-Came pretty decent and fresh i liked your verse...had some good wordplay and punches incorporated into your verse...structure was good and made the flow more appealing to your punches...as for personals...a lil low but ur strong punches took up for that overall i think you took this 6.5/10

you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch'

vs.

In other words, in a text battle, Gs'. . . I still murder em'
I would drop more personals . . .
. . . but honestly, him being wack is all I really heard of em'


v/G.K. easily.

Dickard. 07-27-06 07:13 PM

by the way, Gkilla wanna rtf with an honest vote ....link in sig.

GKillaz05 07-30-06 09:23 PM

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