Im READY - Puget Sound:ON LOCKDOWN MIXTAPE HOSTED BY DJ ROKZ
 

THIS SHITS FIRE

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4241251

ITS GOIN ON MY MIXTAPE WIT DJ ROKZ

This shits gonna be fire

gonna push some units

Hook-Me
1-Me
Hook-me
2-Me
Beat - Projekt MS




LEAVE FEED AND DROP LINKS I RETURN THE FAVOR
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231604
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232324

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i will RTF on this but i'll edit coz i got heads bloody watching Constantine...but it'll definitely be tonight :thumbup:

cheers for the feed btw

uppin man this is FIRE

The Beat and Intro iz crazy...

Hook is on Point..Not really no Dance Song tho
lol unless they movein in slow motion lol

ya 1st verse was on point..flow was on point
im feeling ya 2nd verse the most..the way u came in it
was hot..and ya lyrical content was much better

quality iz amazing...thanx 4 the tipz by the way

i was feelin this shit...this iz crack fam

8/10

Uppin This Fire

aight yo. good look on the feed. returnin it..



hook - was coo. real clubby like. fit the track.


verses - flows good throughout all the verses. lyrically it was just a, you know, relax type ish and let the beat let it do what it do. you know ? so they was straight.

i can see a bitch grindin on my shit in the club on this jam right here. yahmean ?

real solid drop

Listenin' Beat is crack fam u iz right crack muzik, hook on the club shit, honestly i aint rlly feelin it but I know niggas wud and how it bang in the clubs...delivey is perfect thru the track, flow is good too, what this track was made for works, mixtape gangsta joint def wud bump it, hot track id wan start clubbin hearin this so word job done nah mean...very enjoyable

aight good looks on the feed
up

thanks 4 the feed

uppppp

what's hot:
hook is ill. tight shit
Flow is tight as usual
nice delivery and emotion. all good

What's coo:
lyrics coo. nothing too special
beat is coo. not best, not worst

what's not:
nothing

overall tight lil clubby feel to this track. good shit. 8.5/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232650

EZ

beat was str8...


first thing i noticed is i liked ya mic presence..

flow was kinda smooth... like u were laid back but aint forget that u had to maintain a certain tone..

lyrical content was kinda average to me..

the hook shoulda been catchy if ur looking for a banga...

your quality was great.. i could hear everything nicely...

for a mixtape track i think this is one them tracks that your hometown would like n a hand of other people... 's how it's done nowa day's

if your going for the whole "commercial theme" then this would be labeled as a very nice track.. dunno tho

keep droppin fam...

for word thanks for the feed i'm uppin this bitch

uppin leave some feed bitches

ight i dont usually listen to this club music, but i kinda liked this. lyrics were simple but nice. typical club sound here. repping the west. i could see this on the radio or in a club. first verse was solid. chorus is nice. second verse "i love the hoe's i dunno need no first class wife" i like that line. i love how you say "my ass is classy" kinda funny. the outro is ight. all around pretty solid track. great quality and a real smooth mix.

please return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...051#post2823051
*grateful*