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KempoMRK 07-30-06 11:10 AM

47. Jae Blockz (0-0) vs 48. Oz. (0-0)
 


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Stanza. 07-30-06 04:48 PM

Checkin In .............I dunno how many line im goin so if you jus wanna match it its cool to me

Stanza. 07-30-06 06:34 PM

-Start-

Wow My first match and im already shittin on this nigga Like a diaper
You didnt know that I rip Jae's Just ask marv his casket in the cypher
Im so sick that when I spit I burn my top lip Like a can of Raid
dissin nigga's is not in my resume so im gonna go on record and say
Fuck you!.....I hope you know that aint a Diss its jus a modern fact
Because its like im your "safebelt" the way I just "set you Back"
I Straight crush "J Blockz" Like I was playing a easy game of Yotzi
Burnin This bitch Like a Jew With Chlymedia and im The fuckin Natzi
I broke up in Your house and straight did ya girl...yeah she a slut
I shot at Jay so much nigga's thought I was giving the "Directors Cut"


-Finish-

Marksmen. 07-31-06 11:30 AM

-Checkin In ...

Marksmen. 07-31-06 12:07 PM

Why Think Ya Flow'll-See-Mines? Try Your Best, And When It's Over,-Retry
I'll 'Break Ya Collarbone', N Make Ya "Shoulder Lean" Like "Young Dro-N-T.I"
Easily Sonnin-This-Dude, N 'Take Ya Breath', When Ya 'Lungs-Get-Removed'
You'll Get Laid Out, Then "Picked Up N Popped" Like A "Gun-When-It's-Used"
Send Ya Fate-Devastation, 'Blow Ya Head In Tha Air, Call It 'Face-Elevation'
'Sign Ups To Be Sick', U Must Was Like "Kanye West" N Had A "Late-Registration"
I Found Out What Ya Safe-Is-Worth, Sent Some Niggas To Let Tha 8's-Disperse
And Now, I Got You "Rushin To Leave Your House" Like You "Late-For-Work"
I'm Through-Bombin-This-Faggot-Mean, I'll Sit Cool,-Watchin-This-Faggot-Scream
Tried To Be In Da Game, But I "Snatched You Out" Like "Coupons-In-A-Magazine"

~Test~ 07-31-06 04:12 PM

Wow My first match and im already shittin on this nigga Like a diaper
You didnt know that I rip Jae's Just ask marv his casket in the cypher
wtf no.
Im so sick that when I spit I burn my top lip Like a can of Raid
dissin nigga's is not in my resume so im gonna go on record and say
...were is the punch
Fuck you!.....I hope you know that aint a Diss its jus a modern fact
Because its like im your "safebelt" the way I just "set you Back"
no
I Straight crush "J Blockz" Like I was playing a easy game of Yotzi
Burnin This bitch Like a Jew With Chlymedia and im The fuckin Natzi
wtf?
I broke up in Your house and straight did ya girl...yeah she a slut
I shot at Jay so much nigga's thought I was giving the "Directors Cut"
ok needed way better wording


vs.


Why Think Ya Flow'll-See-Mines? Try Your Best, And When It's Over,-Retry
I'll 'Break Ya Collarbone', N Make Ya "Shoulder Lean" Like "Young Dro-N-T.I"
no
Easily Sonnin-This-Dude, N 'Take Ya Breath', When Ya 'Lungs-Get-Removed'
You'll Get Laid Out, Then "Picked Up N Popped" Like A "Gun-When-It's-Used"
no
Send Ya Fate-Devastation, 'Blow Ya Head In Tha Air, Call It 'Face-Elevation'
'Sign Ups To Be Sick', U Must Was Like "Kanye West" N Had A "Late-Registration"
no
I Found Out What Ya Safe-Is-Worth, Sent Some Niggas To Let Tha 8's-Disperse
And Now, I Got You "Rushin To Leave Your House" Like You "Late-For-Work"
no
I'm Through-Bombin-This-Faggot-Mean, I'll Sit Cool,-Watchin-This-Faggot-Scream
Tried To Be In Da Game, But I "Snatched You Out" Like "Coupons-In-A-Magazine"
and no



overall-this was a extremly weak battle both needed better wording oz all ur punchs were like just no and ur last one was barly ok u need to work on ur wording and concepting ur punchlines J wtf take all the "" and the--- out of ur verses and work on ur concept building and ur wording both came really weak imo

vote///oz

Stanza. 08-01-06 06:11 PM

Thanx man ..................im up 1-0 ..............

I will have my battle links when other battles open up


Marksmen. 08-01-06 06:29 PM

Man, This Site Need Some Pussy Lol, Thats All I'ma Say ...0-1 Oz Uppin.

Dickard. 08-01-06 06:32 PM

okay its this simple v/oz.

Oz. you get the win simply becuz u came with..uhh 1 decent attempt to through a punch...now dont get me wrong jae..u had some nice multies...but ur lines stretched so long it was kinda hard to get the flow...and no punches revealed from your verse....oz. just came harder that simple

Stanza. 08-02-06 12:17 AM

im up 2-0 ..............I guess uppin .............................

Ill.Eyes 08-02-06 12:08 PM

I broke up in Your house and straight did ya girl...yeah she a slut
I shot at Jay so much nigga's thought I was giving the "Directors Cut"

Vs.

Nothing.


To start off. the quotable isnt even good, its the LOTB but not even good. you guys disappointed... v/ oz. for having that line

Stanza. 08-02-06 12:50 PM

Uppin.......im up 3-0 ..........bout to get some links for my 4 votes now

Trade Mark. 08-02-06 06:45 PM

Nothing

vs

Why Think Ya Flow'll-See-Mines? Try Your Best, And When It's Over,-Retry
I'll 'Break Ya Collarbone', N Make Ya "Shoulder Lean" Like "Young Dro-N-T.I"

Thought that was good punch

Stanza. 08-03-06 01:49 PM

So I guess that You voted for Jae Blocks .......
Im guessin since you didnt say

if so its 3-1 im up ......................Uppin

Malicious 08-03-06 02:08 PM

Wow My first match and im already shittin on this nigga Like a diaper
You didnt know that I rip Jae's Just ask marv his casket in the cypher
meh
Im so sick that when I spit I burn my top lip Like a can of Raid
dissin nigga's is not in my resume so im gonna go on record and say
no
Fuck you!.....I hope you know that aint a Diss its jus a modern fact
Because its like im your "safebelt" the way I just "set you Back"
o.k
I Straight crush "J Blockz" Like I was playing a easy game of Yotzi
Burnin This bitch Like a Jew With Chlymedia and im The fuckin Natzi
o.k
I broke up in Your house and straight did ya girl...yeah she a slut
I shot at Jay so much nigga's thought I was giving the "Directors Cut"
o.k



Why Think Ya Flow'll-See-Mines? Try Your Best, And When It's Over,-Retry
I'll 'Break Ya Collarbone', N Make Ya "Shoulder Lean" Like "Young Dro-N-T.I"
meh
Easily Sonnin-This-Dude, N 'Take Ya Breath', When Ya 'Lungs-Get-Removed'
You'll Get Laid Out, Then "Picked Up N Popped" Like A "Gun-When-It's-Used"
meh
Send Ya Fate-Devastation, 'Blow Ya Head In Tha Air, Call It 'Face-Elevation'
'Sign Ups To Be Sick', U Must Was Like "Kanye West" N Had A "Late-Registration"
meh
I Found Out What Ya Safe-Is-Worth, Sent Some Niggas To Let Tha 8's-Disperse
And Now, I Got You "Rushin To Leave Your House" Like You "Late-For-Work"
nah
I'm Through-Bombin-This-Faggot-Mean, I'll Sit Cool,-Watchin-This-Faggot-Scream
Tried To Be In Da Game, But I "Snatched You Out" Like "Coupons-In-A-Magazine"
stop comparin shit son


v/oz. for comin less play'd


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