MARY JANE....Banga from ya boy (me) TITO, n CALAM...ILL SHIT
 

okay some old school i love you mary janeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee stuff...but
yes with an oyd flare.....do it up.....ill return the favor (so will tito or ca'lam)


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4260133













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links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2808620
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232640

first verse cool flow and lyrics idk jsut kinda boring to me to be honest but its not bad idk im tired ill listen again tommorow
maybe its my ghetto fabulous headphones but ur vocals sound wierd tito but flow is tight delivery love it good verse for reals
calam you come in with a cool flow lyrics tight probably liked ur verse best good job
i think a dope track would be u tito and ig

..i dont like the first verse..flow is shakey to me and the lyrics coulda been delivered way betta..

Tito..flow is alot betta to me nah mean..and the delivery is good for the track makes it seem like the flow is confident..the lyrics are good to son..still wit that flow tho -_- lol..but yea i like that one betta..kinda loud tho

Calam..ya flow is always on point..I CAN TELL WHERE YOU PUNCHED IN!! lol..sounds like u fell off just a lil bit..lyrics are ok..couldnt really see u on somethin like this thats y i had to peep feel me lol...quality is good too man..

uhh..the track is striahgt just need to work on the first guy..

eh yea i guess thats what i get for trying to be chill on a track.....with all these kids needing their "emotion" oh well.....good shit, uppin

The beat is pretty dope, could of been a lil better for a mary jane song, but the flows fit it well.

First Guy - You flowed pretty well, you had some sick lyrics, I liked some of the shit you was sayin' fit the topic of this song really good.

Second Guy - YOOO, your song with SevenThird was fire yo, so compared to that this wasnt good. But not compared to that, your flow was good, quality was niice, you fir the beat niice, sounded like some niice mixin' rhymes where iight.

Third Guy - You Verse flowed well as well, overall it was a good track, Heard better from you too, but still not sayin' it was bad. Good weed track, your verse like the others fit the beat and rhymed nicely, and fit the topic.

Hook - Decent.

Overall I'd give this track a 8.5/10


RTF on Speats n My Songs, its up here in the songs, dont got a link on hand.

NO DOUBT NO DOUBT

Calam we got our first Collab :)

lol


Yo..... not for nothing.... but if yall dont mind.... im throwing this on my jump off.... im pushin my release date back to September 11... so i can get a lil more work done... so.. Holla at me for more collabs and all that good shit :)


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word yo ^. good shit.. drop ya links

jay def brought his A+ flow big quality difference between u and tito tho...tito man relax u bout to be known like jeezy for them adlibs tight verse fluent steez......calammalamading dong damn man the flow is really smooth u really got a hott sound cuzzin its like beats that sound like this were meant fo yea no kids nice track right here lovin it prolly rock this in the whip

What's hot:
shit, y'all meshed real nicely in this.
Jay flow, delivery and emotion. all on point
tito flow and shit too. lol @ adlibs. nice
Ca'lam just as usual comes thru with that heat. good shit

what's coo:
hook is coo
lyrics, they was coo

what's not:
lol man i really ain't like this beat

overall tight ass track right here. tight shit. beat only shit i ain't like lol. but overall it was tight. stay up y'all. 8.7/10

I know ca'lam has but if y'all can RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232650

EZ

no doubt i got you SP....

but Whats this bout my libs????



LOL


somebody gotta break that shit down for me... dont know if thats a good thing or a bad thing.... :)

TO THE TOPPPP

^I actually liked your adlibs. shit was nice touch ~_~

no doubt no doubt :)


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listening....

ok... first things first.... didn't expect a slow beat hear... this was REEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAL laid back...werd.... kool choice, though

Jay... hmmmm... you sound a lil tinny on the track.... lyrics were cool... but what ya need to work on is making ya lines flow more fluently.... it's kinda like ya jumped around a lil bit... ya stayed on topic but it seemed as if some things didn't flow well together... overall it was pretty decent though

Tito...wow... ya story telling ability is crazy on this.... always liked ya flow... i'd tone down the libs a lil bit... they just as loud as ya main vocals...lol... i could actually visualize a nukka trying to find some weed and all the dealers are talking about how they ain't got none...lol.. good shyt

calam....omg!!!... i don't know what verse i liked best!... ya did ya thang on this too.... ya didn't look at it as if it were a person like jay and tito did but you did throw a reference in there... ya shyt still flowed on point and ya lines fed into each other... which is what i was tryna to get across to jay on his part... liked your visualization also.... good shyt, yall... and whenever y'all nukkaz wanna collab just holla...


jay... i ain't forget ya man.... i still got yours on deck!!!

preciate the feed Gram :)


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