Nick Fletcher. vs Oz.
 

Multies Battle

8-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 = KO


For those who don't understand, this is NOT a battle to see who can just write a verse with the best multies. The winner should be the person who uses multies the best to craft punches. So a freestyle self-glorifying verse with multies against a dissing verse with multies... the dissing verse is going to win. Get me. If you don't, then DO NOT VOTE!!!

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 08-04-06 at 04:17 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Nick Fletcher. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 05:09 PM.

Oz. aka Stanza

Here's a quick verse for you, I ain't have to try.

Check it,
I'll fuckin hit stan, till he gets cooked in the pan.. he sucks at this, an'
.. ya can feel me kill Oz's gang with a bang..
..the lion, the scarecrow.. and the fuckin' tin man!
Ya crew can't touch mine, even given some time, 'coz when they in a bunch, I'm..
.. a be droppin' a poor joke on your folk...... and ure the punchline!
Fuckin rip ya to size.. I'm dissin ure rhymes.. kickin shit in ure eyes
'Coz this fat fuck, he act tough..
.. but his idea of a combo is fuckin chicken with fries!
Shit's goin' down, and I'm rapin this clown.. ya gettin' laid in the ground
'Coz look bitch, i'm seein rough shit... and ure mom ain't even around
I'm tearin' ya clean through, the reality's real true, I'm a beat on this weak jew
Get owned under me, change the O to an E..
.. and then you can peep the way that I'm gonna beat you!
I see the wack ass gene has spread, so I'll smack a geek instead
'Coz Oz, RV peeped ya MySpace.. now we know we're galaxies ahead..
..of you, ya see the world has revolved, and now I got ya wackness well solved..
.. and now I aspire to set this man on fire.. without having Denzel involved.

pz, dude :thefinger

Oz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 06:40 PM.

Nice drop solo But why do your lines always be so stretched?.........

LMAO!! They don't be stretched.... a stretched line is one that is pulled out for so long that it fucks up the flow. If you can maintain flow with multies like in this battle you could drag it on forever.

But, other times... I know when to break a line up with the 3-line bar style. If you try and read it all fluid then it will sound fucked. When there is like a comma, it is a slight pause, and whenever there is like .. put after a few words, that is a slightly longer pause.

Half these cock-fucks need to recognise that the gay perfect structure style died out halfway through fucking 2005 man.

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

Cliam you stacked but nigga You wack Talkin funny Get You Smacked
So Dont slack Or Ill Bring the Gat & Have Yo Back Jacked Like Cadillacs!!

v.s

Check it,
I'll fuckin hit stan, till he gets cooked in the pan.. he sucks at this, an'
.. ya can feel me kill Oz's gang with a bang..
..the lion, the scarecrow.. and the fuckin' tin man!
I'm tearin' ya clean through, the reality's real true, I'm a beat on this weak jew
Get owned under me, change the O to an E..
.. and then you can peep the way that I'm gonna beat you!
..of you, ya see the world has revolved, and now I got ya wackness well solved..
.. and now I aspire to set this man on fire.. without having Denzel involved.

overall, shit was coo

multies were coo on both parts. But oz edged nick out with the multi usuage. but by slim margin. in the punches, i think Nick easily had harder hitting shit than Oz. so he easily got that category. So overall, Nick just edged this one out. coo shit here tho. stay up y'all

v/NF

EZ

Hooray, a person who gets that it ain't just about ILL multies... it is who uses them best to craft punches. But word, OZ... that was a nice verse son.

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

This was honestly a one sided battle where the loosing side was trying too hard and the winning side didn't try at all really.

Nick came out with some throwback shit that I know he must have had in his closet for just the occation. Oz. didn't come hard at all. His multies was annoying and simple, and he didn't really diss nick at all. Nick had two bars that I liked as to where Oz. really had none at all so this battle easily goes Nick.

Personals - Nick
Punches - NIck
Flow And Structure - Oz.
Creativity - Nick
Metaphores - Nick
Multies - None.

V/Nick Fletcher....RTF

Agreed... That shit is gay really. A structure has to have surtain format to make it easy to read but the whole

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That shits wak. its for niggaz that just starting out to rap and dont know how to get into they own style yet.

LOL RV is really bullshit they dont understand that ........That is my Style !!!

lol Idiots

Yeah, but Stanza... you need to switch your style because nobody likes that fixed structure shit anymore. I used to do it also, until I realised it wasn't working.

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

Yea Nigga Yea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

multies you killed him dawg....i mean you incorporated..the punches with the multies nicely....not much to critique...its obvious u ussed ur multies to ur advantage and didnt try to force them to the max like ur opponent....Ur punches were tight....new and original...oz. u didnt really have nice punhces....and multies wwere kinda like w/e lol...overal picard got this cuz he just came harder in almost every categorie.....no doubt.