Danger Ft. Insyt and Vokal
 

This is a club track that insyt made. Ft. myself and vokal on it. Shits kinda old actully almost 2 years old. Leave feedback and links.

www.soundclick.com/matgrimes
(Danger)

First: Insyt
Second: Mat Grimes
Third: Vokal
Hook: Insyt

Enjoy

Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...23&postcount=25
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...19&postcount=16

beat i kinda like it really
first guy flow is ok he sounds like juvenile kinda with his delivery flow was cool kinda old though
hook is kinda boring rhyme scheme extremely predictable
2nd guy hate ur verse lyrics are gay rhymes scheme same sotry
not feeling the uh parts delivery you dont sound confident
3rd i like yours the best probably with the4 exception of the quality

shit this is loud as fuck!


but yeah i am feeling the beat..cool choice!


verse one..boy u had a nice flow!..lyrics are just there..yeah u got a decent quality..delivery is iight..


hook...its iight just that when u say 'with a little spanish flava......' it kinna made u rush the words and had a slight off flow


verse two...yeah u had a nice flow...i liked the emotion put in this it matched the beat..decent delivery..u got a cool quality..atleast better than mine


verse 3...boy ur quality is bad...i mean its worse than mine..but yeah ur flow backed u up..nice!


i dont like the way this track finished...the fade out came too soon..y'all shud have left the beat goin a lil more at least...that just messed the track up...

but yeah decent job..i think y'all still at the beginin of this so yeah nice looks and gd luck!

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-wun-