Hot!!! Me and Crew's First song: Apology Lullaby
 

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uppin gimme some feeds

I didn't really like the beat's intro sounded Fruity Loop-ish.

Singing is ok, could be mixing alot better, 1st guy I wasn't really feeling, same with the second guy. The rapping just sounds amateurish especially next to the singing. Just needs more work basically, but it is a first song. The last rap verse showed the most promise.

the overall mixing needs some tweeking as well.

yeah, it's unfurnished but thnx for the feed

where are your linx?


ima drop feed anyways



umm...bet idk not really feeling it

hook was sincere..nice thats the only part i liked most

dude on the first verse had a pretty nice voice..he shudnt have rap/sang instead just rap wud be nicer


lyrics in general were a lil too repititive...only the 2guys on the third verse had something a lil different from the others and a different flow/style...



um idk if i wud replay this track but yeah its decent at least it made sense!


hit my sig...thanx