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Basically, SERB is a HERB.
Right, how about this for a fucking RAW diss motherfucker. :)
Check it, Basically, Serb is a herb.. and basically, its easy to make him fall.. .................................................. ..................................... .................................................. ............. .................................................. ..................... .................................................. .......................... .................................................. ............... .................................................. ............................ .................................................. ..................................... .................................................. ............. .................................................. ..................... .................................................. .......................... .................................................. ............... .................................................. ............................... .................................................. .................................. .................................................. ............. .................................................. ..................... .................................................. .......................... .................................................. ............... .................................................. ............................ 'Coz basically you suck, and that basically says it all. Done. :gfy: |
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The structure was pretty good. The wordplay was ok. It was pretty witty to add the suspense into it by placing the long pause, and belittling his value by simplifying the diss. Also insinuating weakness subliminally by stating it's easy to make him fall was a major blow to his manhood since his physical stability can make or break his pride. I'll give it a 9/10. Good shit.
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You should actually write an OM diss to him, crush that motherfucker so he leaves the site.
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^LMAO.. that basically said it all Serb= OWNED!! |
Like it matters...and what the fuck is a herb?
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^you, are a herb.
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Lmao no doubt^
good shit, that's cocky as fuck . I likes it. |
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.................................................. .................................. fav line, that shit was illy. I dont know, something about it just had me picturing bullets thrown at dude and shit, which was awesome imagery on your part or mine or the lines, but yea man, this was a fresh read, one of the better drop's i've seen on here, you were a little repetitive but it didnt matter, some of the lines werent expected, which made it a good read for sure, i just wish you would have stayed consistent, but i loved the multis and the rhyme scheme, the whole thing rhymed like butter. holla |
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