Tony Green Presents ~Disciple~
 

yeah yeaah peeps finally figured out how to up my quality now ur boy is a true beast the real rv rookie of the year is here.......

"Disciple"

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will post 2nd asap keep it open willa thanxx love ya

nice man.. liked this shit.... it feels like.. there a lil bit of static..but not really..unless its my speaker or soemthing? idk haha but anyways..good shit, liked the lyrics..the hook was tight..keep it up
*where im from*

your flow is off a little bit and your quality doesnt really sound that good right now
also you should turn the volume off the beat down a little bit and up your volume
like the 3rd verse best btw

Quality doesn't sound that good...you sound boring on tha track...2nd verse is coo. I don't really like the hook. It's too energetic and then the verses aren't. This isn't your best track in my opinion...Just ight. Too much gun talk. Unless you really know tha dude, he lives in your area, or you made real contact with him, gun talk is irrelevant...But, okay song.

Thanxx fo the feed

ight the sample at the begioning is cool beat comes in i think i heard this beat before
beat needs to be lowered a bit delivery is aight jus needs to be upped maybe its cuz the beat to loud flows off in a few spots adlibs is aight hook needs a lil work lyrics is decent word ya verses need to be mixed but jus not on cool edit....overall u would sound way better if shit was mixed and vocals were compressed....holla at me some time ....welcome to skm word

Thanxx fam-o and yeah we gone get on this thou Nok Out Kingz/SKM how we get down

Listen'n like the openin intro...

Beat is ok...

1st: Cant really hear u my dude u sound muffled...Flow is a lil choppy...lyrics cool lacked emotion...delivery was okay

HOoK: I didnt like...man i dont know it lacked emotion that raw shit..feel me.? all though i liked the dog barking in the background that was dope

2nd: was a lil better than the first...it sounded clear...delivery was better to me it started to sound like u was gettin that confidence...

HOok: Same

3rd: Balances it out..yo for real...u came off better on this one not enough energy on the other 2...but good shit..

Over-all
Dog it coulda bin mixed better an beat turned down some..if not turn the beat down then turn the vocals up it woulda sounded a lot better..hook was weak but energy was crazy....ive' heard better shit from u before...but other than that i dont see anything else wrong...keep it up kid hope to see more drops from u....my ratin 4.5/10 holla back..1 :thumbup:

Thanxx man still uppin

your flow is pretty decent man, needs some work but still decent, hook could use more energy, overall the track is not bad, and lol ur quality aint that good either haha. my bad for taking so long to peep i work full time