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Group E: Wyte (0-2) vs TeamOne (0-2)
 If you showed last week, good.. I'm proud of you. But if you no-showed and were given a second chance DON'T fuck it up. Cause you'll be out. Some have moved up to 2-0 and are looking strong, while some are slumping at 0-2. Whatever the record.. it doesnt clinch anything. You still gotta go at you opponents and take their heads off. This week I want to see everyone show up AND vote. A couple battles had two losers last week due to not voting and leaving links. I'm not hunting for links so post em up or I'm DQing you. Show me somethin this week.. Battler #1: TeamOne Battler #2: Wyte Battles go up Sunday night Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET) 5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET) Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do: - Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding. - If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed - Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose. - If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates. |
Check. And G/l.
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checkin........
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Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him
but ur punches are a highlight, ......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em |
You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you
^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude |
This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck
This wont be over until the fat lady sings… …And were still waiting for his girl to show up |
i love how the other weeks this faggot dropped his punches in a white font, but for this battle he SO conveniently decided not to.......
We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch |
Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him
but ur punches are a highlight, ......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em idea for the personal was good, but I felt ya coulda worded this a bit better You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you ^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude a quick tip, adding multies improves flow.. so if you had something that rhymed with drunk instead of likes in your setup, the flow is improved. Anyway, this was kinda played, seen a lot of shots lines before and saying he's drunk isn't much of a diss This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck This wont be over until the fat lady sings… …And were still waiting for his girl to show up okay, but a bit too basic. Try bein' a little more creative We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch A couple groupie lines were used week 1 so this is played by now but okay Pretty close battle here, but I think Fux's opener gives him the edge here. Wyte, keep at it, just try bein' a little more creative next week and try to think of concepts which are less likely to have been done before. Vote - Team One |
Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him
but ur punches are a highlight, ......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em this was worded horribly...pretty much by like one letter too..if you would have changed couldnt..to..woudnt...it would have been a lot better.and even than theres ways you could have made it better..good concept though You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you ^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude i'm drunk 90% of the time i'm on here..so what? This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck This wont be over until the fat lady sings… …And were still waiting for his girl to show up best i've seen from you so far We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch i liked it..best punch of the battle pretty weak battle..i do think teamone came harder here than you did last week ..and i see potential...i also liked his closer more than anything in this battle Vote - Team One |
Teamone:
Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him but ur punches are a highlight, ......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em ^^this was an alright punch didnt hit too hard though You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you ^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude ^^this was also ok nothing spectacular or anything just decent VS. Wyte: This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck This wont be over until the fat lady sings… …And were still waiting for his girl to show up ^^elementary, coulda been worded better We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch ^^this is alright, wasnt really feelin it tho Both people came wack IMO coulda been a better battle.. but i gotta say team got this one, his bars werent as played Vote: TeamOne |
Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him
but ur punches are a highlight, ......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em ehh, i used pretty much the same punch against him in week 1 so this is played for me You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you ^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude shots/alcohol is played man This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck This wont be over until the fat lady sings… …And were still waiting for his girl to show up lmao, nice We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch this is dope. good wordplay |
v/ Whyte.
I thought this was one sided. Team one came wack in my books. his shit was simple, worded bad, no amazing concept. and plus whyte his first punch was played to death, as Whyte nameplay is old shit man. get more witty. don't rush the punch and actrually take time to word stuff good. whyte didnt come much better. but I thought he had some funny concepts. I agree that his first punch wasn't much of a diss. but it was still funny and i liked the humor in it. his 2nd punch would of been better if worded better. but the concept was there. V/wyhte. |
^^^^ i didnt have a "whyte" nameplay serb????? i was commentin on the fact that he does all his battles in this white font that u cant read unless u highlight it...... but MIRACULOUSLY he decided not to do it this battle after my first punch..... i hope this wont count as swaying, expecially wen i already have like 4 votes.... im pretty much just stating facts
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Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him
but ur punches are a highlight, ......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em ^^didn't hit hard to me You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you ^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude ^^wtf just..lame This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck This wont be over until the fat lady sings… …And were still waiting for his girl to show up ^^weak. We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch ^^played well v/ Teamone he actually attempted a good personal and didn't come as lame. weak battle imo |
Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him
but ur punches are a highlight, ......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em DECENT SHIT HERE CUZ ITS TRUE You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you ^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude THIS WAS TOO CASUAL, NEEDED MORE TO HIT EM HARDER VS This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck This wont be over until the fat lady sings… …And were still waiting for his girl to show up OK BUT THAT CONCEPT IS PLAYED We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch MEHNESS ITS OK I GUESS THIS BATTLE DIDNT HAVE ANY REAL HITS BUT IMA GO WITH FUX CUZ HIS WAS SLIGHTLY STRONGER V/TEAM |
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