"What;s Golden Remix" - Paranoid, Enygma, And LE
 

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Word...a pretty tight collab that's taken a while to get done, thanks to me. But I finally got around to it.

Verse 1- Paranoid
Verse 2- Enygma
Verse 3- LE

Word...leave some links and the favours shall be returned.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233275
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233177

first verse paranoid????
sounds like le?
idk wtf lol
gotta thick accent that i dont really like lyrics are pretyt cool flow isnt necesarily off but it doesnt really flow smooth
i do not like the hook



fuck i hate it when ppl ask me to leave feed when ive been drinking
that would be stanley playing on your page not the golden track

damn
ok


flow was cool voice is cool no really hard punches idk pretty cool verse i guess
lmao at walk through ethiopia wiht fries and a big mack lol cool flow smae delivery emotion cool shti lol
le your flow idk isnt really that smooth to me lyrics were cool

id give it a 6/10
"walk through ethiopia wiht fries in a big mac"

Thanks. Up and away.

willa it's not a battle track it's a remix, it's mainly a lyrical track.

Damn...what can a couple of guys do to get some feed?

HAHA i frikkin love the original J5 tune

beats always bin nice.......

paranoid- flows nice...lyrics are kool for the tune....the delivery's quite monotonous and gets quite repetitive quickly though....doesnt sound too bad but it'd be more interesting switchin up abit every now and then....

enygma-okkk, im feelin the way ya come in....soundin reaal comfortable on this...flows almost effortless...deliverys hot....yerr dope verse...cant crit much bout it lol

LE-right...flows nice...damn im feelin ya delivery nd emotion.....soundin nice nd cocky haha....LMAO at the lyrics aswell..."i show her my socks and boxers nd she lifts her blouse" lmaoo....yerrr nice verse

yerrrrr dope track yo :thumbup:

1st MC - flow is robotic....but nice lyrics.......delivery is strate.....quality could be upped a bit.......overall strate verse....
2nd MC - came better than 1st nice delivery, real energetic...lol at da Big Mac Line.......nice flow......overall strate verse.......Came the best out of all MCs
Hook - get's point across
3rd MC - lol at "get ya wet...ya girl wet":...flow is nice quality is crisp, but work on pronuinciation maybe it's juss da accent but some words i had to listen again to understand...........not bad...feelin how ya mixed ya part.........

aiite RTF if ya could on: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233473

pz

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1st dude - jeeze could you show a little emotion please... lyrics we're alright i guess kinda hard to follow when your flow is montonous

2nd dude- hahaha ollddd schoool sounding flow, love it... but the lyrics is are sooo basic lol if you work on em you'll be iiigght

3rd - well your flow was definately off on the breakdown, but its iight on the main sample... but still the lyrics are mad basic

Overall a decent track, better than average i would say... but all three of you have shit to work on (as we all do but)
*unfinished business*

thanks for the feed, but yo ^ lyrics aren't hard to follow as long as the pronounceation is good. but good looks yall

yo paranoid sorry to free post but is it coo if wanna yall peep my thread.........

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233473

thanx.......

pz

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It's really not about the pronunciation its about your delivery, the lyrics we're hard to follow because of the lack of emotion... its hard to stay interested

^yes and yes.....lol but man pronouneaction is more important then you think, would you wannna mumble lots. but the point is I'm workin on it, it's not that easy to over come. it's comin slowly to me. pretty much every track i get better

^you didn't feed LE, oh well haha LE you sucka! ;)

typing as I listen....ok damn para comes right now...ok flow is better still choppy tho...ya still stretching ya syllables to hit on the snare...delivery was better but still on the monotone side....lyrics was koo nothign spectacular

verse 2...enygma coming wit the enyg speedy flow...flow is koo...aint really blowing me away but its on beat...it has a few shaky spots as well...delivery was kinda blan tho...I ono what it is but everytime I peep u ya delivery jus doesn't draw me in...lyrically had good amount of multies...more of a style over substance verse.

Verse 3...ok came in a lil awkward...flow is on snare but not liking its rhythm with this beat...halfway thru, second half of verse flow gets on point better...sounds alot smoother....delivery was koo...best delivery on track....lyrics again nothign jumps out at me but decent...good drop.