Life an the Come Up..... FEAT THESINNISTER
 

Rexless In Blue
Legend In Red


let me know if u feel pain
many think its physical but mostly in my brains
how we went from bike rydein to hoping on trains
to pitching baseball.... to feens coping them thangs
gang's shall remain.... hoes shall never change
guns still gonna bang.... racist fag's still gonna hang
making money aint ever easy, plez believe me
went from sleeping on the floor, to eating on the T.V
aint have cable so the hood was our reality show
bearly had food, so to keep wify full she had to learn to blow
while i learn to flow she had to learn to show off half her body.....
while am spitting on the side laying with the shotty
for the first wrong intention, then blast with full agression
these are mirra life reflection, some dont know what to do other dos it to prefection
while other leave it as a comment i leave it as a question
come on lets SHOUT IT....
they say live life to the fullest, but whats so full about it????
aint have shit but we gain much,
rex an sinnister the cats u cant touch
look where we started an look where we end'ed
so in ya tomb, we'll carve our verse an let god Amen'ed

We are the ones who took all the blame
Castaways, abused torn confused and thrown away
Left to be a discrace or a face without a name
Trapped in a place of masqurades escaping too late
Made to raise the stakes Now my fate lay on thy plate
Till the bridge of Fears that will no longer exist
Welds these tears to reveal this intense gift
You can't resist power of will so immense persits
Life starts abliss again corrupt, errupt with sin
Devour pure power,one hour we climb the mountin
like roaches surviving wer'e Take it higher
Until the music stops rise-ing all thy Desire
Your temperature fire's, Then your body drops
everything i got,created By A Mile Alone
I bare no grudge and carry no milestone!

aint have shit but we gain much,
rex an sinnister the cats u cant touch
look where we started an look where we end'ed
so in ya tomb, we'll carve our verse an let god Amen'ed


Welcome to the life, where pops hugs the block
Instead of his kids, only got love for the rock
Like MJ but them stay in courts that lack a hoop
They pack the tools like bob villa to stack the loot
Through acts that’s rude, in rivers bodies get dragged in nude
The whole avenue’s too rough for even action news
So all actions spew from little black lucy lou’s
In the blackest of moons in small packs they move
Like wolves and rules to the game, there’s really none
Just don’t hesitate or your fate becomes the gun
And here’s the twist, moms dig this shit
The sight liquids the clit sends an invite for dick
And inside he spits, gets up, then dick he splits
Mom sits and twists the cap off the brew and sips
Till her room it spins and her womb begins
To grow, the seeds been sown through acts of sin
But her passion sits inside the st. ides label
Alone cuz pops went AWOL she’s barely able
To support herself she’s even poor in health
And well she gave up, won’t even fend for self
And the kid, shit nine months have gone by
With no pops, and moms only worried with highs
Moms don’t know it’s not right, childs held less then the pipe
But we open our eyes and this sight welcomes our life
This is how we’re welcomed to life

DAMN, THATS SOME SHIT, I FELT YOU THE WHOLE WAY DAWG, THAT SHITS DEEP AND TRUE

making money aint ever easy, plez believe me
went from sleeping on the floor, to eating on the T.V

KEEP IT UP KID


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233697

This was pretty good shawty, i was feelin the flow alot. there were some nice bars mixed in there. i would have done a more thorough chorus ya feel me? but other than that, stay up hit me back on my jawn

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233756

thanks for the feed back everyone i will hit up u'r joint in a min fam cool??

upp'inf or more feed back.........

oh thats wassup i was feeling the two blue parts cause they mostly relate to real hood stuff
but in general the whole thing was good

but give me some feedback on mine

head 2 da sky -wiley d

Put the legend in there, where it says who is in blue and who is in red... plus im adding another verse............

hey we can do a remix? or a part 2 an then u can add u'r verse to that cool?????

remix it with me in there :)

no dout....

remix is in the making fella's.....

but upp'in for more feed back on this one/1.........

upp'in............................................ ...

We are the ones who took all the blame
Castaways, abused torn confused and thrown away

damn nice shit i really did like that bar....this was nice but kinda off in some aspects...flow was pretty nice stayed on point thru out...multies were kinda weak you couldve imrpoved them alot...strutre was meh for both of you...some lines were strecthed but it was easy to read...you two stayed on topic really well...keep homie and look out for my new drop...both you did really good try to fix up the vocab that was the weakest for both

Yo, Put sinnister in red not ledgend, Ledgend is what tells pepole who is who...lol its aight just fix it

nice drop ya massive props i like the collabo i like the topic an i like how you to came at it different ways but stood on the same topic nicely done 10/10