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heads 2 da sky
no amount of money could amount to my motivation
cause i have most of my inspiration from anger and seeing love ones taken to heaven then i have to deal with all this jealousy and hatred im tired like slavery days of hearing the things they is saying man i got to get my weight up similiar to being over weighted and half of these niggas in the industry is overrated niggas dont wanna see me make it ,like they dont wanna see a old woman naked so like these hoes giving head my head stay down im sick of letting these niggas put my day down so i look for niggas to slide and swing on like a playground man i got bad days like seeing a gray cloud i got my head to the sky with my mouth open wide with the mic right beside yup aint nobody messing with me now got my head to the clouds screaming f these clowns i got my head to the sky with my mouth open wide with the mic right beside yup aint nobody messing with me now got my head to the clouds screaming f these clowns this is for the clowns yall should be using yall time putting on make up even though being hated is the only reason i wake up cause seeing me shine is going to have yall depressed like a bad break up cause ima blow up like after seeing soda shake up like my career i put two fingers straight up to show my hater what they made a small nigga that would blow from a pin like a grenade everybody is going to have my cd in their house like im a first aid parents are going to go to my concerts and shows like its a play in first grade people say you'l grow out of it but ive been through the worst faise im praying to god everyday and it dont seem like church pays i got my head to the sky with my mouth open wide with the mic right beside yup aint nobody messing with me now got my head to the clouds screaming f these clowns i got my head to the sky with my mouth open wide with the mic right beside yup aint nobody messing with me now got my head to the clouds screaming f these clowns i dont get alot out of this world cause i dont look my age but my heads to the sky so i look that way man i got a dyme mixed with black and white when i make it ima make it right cause ima shine so bright people think they seen the light in the day time i stay with a knife but i stay strapped in the night cause i can inpersonate god and take ya life niggas looking at me with hate like i raped dey wife fuck the nice vocab and metaphors this is the real reason i chose to be a rapper for it feels like my mind is trapped with war to the point i dont respect if that is yours cause when i put 2 fingers up im scrapping whore and i aint talkin about the fuck you that will leave faggots sore all you see on my street is cops at door cause we all on the same hustle that'l leave pockets warm if you think im not real you must be misinformed cause i spit shit that'l make sockets form the niggas on my block would just be amazed to walk in a prada store and we here loud things at night like a thunder storm the rain falls from the sky,like tears from our mothers eye cause she working a 5 to 5 and still struggling even when my brother try so now i got a step father so we have help from another guy saying shit got better would just be another lie cause more money means more problems cause i spend my money on the littlest shit like condoms im sorry i had to cuss alot but this is real talk rapping is like a movement and nomatter how wack you say i am i still walk like bone crusher i never get scared ..i got the chilled heart |
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This was dope !!! would sound even doper on audio !!! some of your bars were
nice !! yall should be using yall time putting on make up even though being hated is the only reason i wake up cause seeing me shine is going to have yall depressed like a bad break up cause ima blow up like after seeing soda shake up Just really nice flow,.. solid drop,.. hope to see more from you, stay active and keep writing. 1~ |
it wuz ok but not actually dope to me 7/10...good wurk....
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good looking out on the feedback
but i need more feedback fuck the nice vocab and metaphors this is the real reason i chose to be a rapper for it feels like my mind is trapped with war to the point i dont respect if that is yours cause when i put 2 fingers up im scrapping whore and i aint talkin about the fuck you that will leave faggots sore all you see on my street is cops at door cause we all on the same hustle that'l leave pockets warm if you think im not real you must be misinformed cause i spit shit that'l make sockets form the niggas on my block would just be amazed to walk in a prada store and we here loud things at night like a thunder storm the rain falls from the sky,like tears from our mothers eye cause she working a 5 to 5 and still struggling even when my brother try so now i got a step father so we have help from another guy saying shit got better would just be another lie cause more money means more problems cause i spend my money on the littlest shit like condoms im sorry i had to cuss alot but this is real talk rapping is like a movement and nomatter how wack you say i am i still walk like bone crusher i never get scared ..i got the chilled heart i come harder than im already am like a steel shark i aint got nothing more to say so ima leave this at a question mark like a bad break up this is where the depression starts i stay active like teen sex and wants to get big like a blonde teens breast this is best said then written for respect so like ass on the mic im about to start shittin in text |
i like the flow u have its good keep it up, the story was good, i felt some of the lines u spit you def keep it hood an more reality then that fake super natrual shit that people always claims get you in the game which to me it dont.....
lost poet quoted the lines i was feeling as-well those are the best line in this drop keep it up fam an we should collabo on a joint or something hit me up if anything fam 1......... |
good looking on the feedback
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i mean damn can i get some feedback
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cause ima shine so bright people think they seen the light
in the day time i stay with a knife but i stay strapped in the night loved that right there pretty damn nice....flowed very well....alot of multies that fit right in with flow...vocab was very nice it made it more enjoyable to read...the topic is very very good....i loved the creativty of this drop....really good man keep up.. |
good lookin on the feedback
can i get somemore |
chorus wasnt bad, first verse maybe could have used a better rhyme scheme and shit, flow coulda been tightened up a bit too maybe. but overall not bad. although it annoys me that you spell the da lol.. but keep doing you man, hit up my sweet dreams piece when you get the chance
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good lookin on the feedback
so can i get more |
Not bad, could have used a little bit better structure, i like the emotion you put into it!....I give it a 7/10 not bad...... Keep droppin man
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good lookin on the feedback and i write with emotion ....thats the reason i write
but i still maintain to be the same ol g,and hood nigga |
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