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KempoMRK 08-27-06 03:35 PM

19. Comedian (2-0) vs 20. Rae Report (1-0)
 


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Rae Report 08-27-06 04:08 PM

Check...........

Comedian 08-29-06 05:00 PM

hi.

around 10?

Rae Report 08-31-06 08:25 PM

Lmao...this suppose to be compo...well i think he's soft
damn if your gonna hand me my ass,
.....thanks after readin your verse i laughed it off
dude can't even go on stage he jus stummbles and chokes
really isn't comedians suppose to be good at tellin standup jokes
you never get bitchs....sittin back thinkin why
comdian is a perfect name for the ladies...to'em he a standup guy
the blade's sharp, cuttin threw this joke im pokin
that'll have moses furious how red i splitten the c open
Nope fuck it..i'll cut threw ya dreams and hopes
so my sword'll put a new meaning to pokin some jokes
Broke fucker we can handle this here or the street
ya lights'll get knocked out,
..an payin the bill wont help you get back on ya feet
ya wack in the studio..cant even record a decent diss track
you'll get beat in the booth........of the diner you works at

Comedian 08-31-06 08:30 PM

Battling me? Either you're bold and queer or drunk as shit
But fuck holding your liquor, hold your tears, when these punches hit
I'll trump this kid, pulling his cards, I'm shining and a said sinner
While Rae is lost, no one sees him... his hopes darker than the dead singer
This kid's a real Pimp,pimp? You stutter when my hold is choken
But shiiiiiit, there MUST be an echo; cause you leaving broke 'n broken
I eclipse rays, breaking up light... now it's just a matter of how
But believe that your future's dark and insecure, left in a shadow of doubt
Homo got a chip on his shoulder, he's never gonna drop it
Secret to the day he dies and he'll be the skeleton in the closet

Comedian 08-31-06 08:30 PM

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...ught#post486694

Quote:
Originally Posted by Aero
So Retire~Your~Team! I'll Have you Bleeding_in_Person & have ya Casket Bought
Hand Me My Ass? Thanks!! Because while Reading_your_Verses I Laughed It Off


Whaaaaaaat?

Rae Report 08-31-06 08:32 PM

aint no bite dude

Rae Report 09-01-06 03:13 PM

uppppiinnnnnnnnnnn

Brock Sampson 09-02-06 03:01 PM

R.R.


Nope fuck it..i'll cut threw ya dreams and hopes
so my sword'll put a new meaning to pokin some jokes
Broke fucker we can handle this here or the street
ya lights'll get knocked out,
..an payin the bill wont help you get back on ya feet
ya wack in the studio..cant even record a decent diss track
you'll get beat in the booth........of the diner you works at

-vs-

I'll trump this kid, pulling his cards, I'm shining and a said sinner
While Rae is lost, no one sees him... his hopes darker than the dead singer
I eclipse rays, breaking up light... now it's just a matter of how
But believe that your future's dark and insecure, left in a shadow of doubt


ok.....I think Rae got this...even tho there is a suspect line of bitin or just a horrible flip. It was MAD stretched anyway man. but the lines I quoted..I liked! The red C line was worded bad but the conept was OK. Comedian what happend yo!? I remeber readin some other verses that were niice? Prolly Rust huh!? The shadow of a doubt line was ight...played concept but i gave it to you..;)

We'll see what they say about the SUSPECT LINE...until then.

V/ Rae Report

.Platinum. 09-02-06 03:25 PM

v-Comedian cause Rae bit

Comedian 09-02-06 11:11 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234040
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234049
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234053

@ Brock, yah, I didn't have that much time for this. No excuses, though.

DaTrusHurtz 09-03-06 10:40 AM

dude can't even go on stage he jus stummbles and chokes
really isn't comedians suppose to be good at tellin standup jokes
Broke fucker we can handle this here or the street
ya lights'll get knocked out,
..an payin the bill wont help you get back on ya feet

vs.

I eclipse rays, breaking up light... now it's just a matter of how
But believe that your future's dark and insecure, left in a shadow of doubt

Wasn't feelin' much in this battle, didn't look like much effort went into it. Who knows if Comedian woulda won if he wrote more lines, but I can't penalize Rae for that since he dropped first so i got him takin' this. And no, I don't think thats a bite, just a played idea.

Vote - Rae

KempoMRK 09-03-06 04:28 PM

Rae Report bites, he's banned.

Comedian wins (3-0)
Rae Report loses (1-1)


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