InfLuEnTiaLWuN vs educate19
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 tko


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-27-06 at 09:29 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Educate19 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-06 07:51 PM.

livin in a prison isnt in him/
life style outta rhythum/
picturin recievn wisdom/
thru a drifferent prisom/
tired of pipes and layin at night schemin/
believes in angels and demons cuz im seein em/
thru visions of cream and dirty beef heads/
meat heads just tryin to get they needs met/
knees bent say a prayer for me father/
this is hell i see firey gates man its a cell/
i wish em well, o yea holla my best/
cuz now imma swallow my vects/
no apologes next/
im all that i am took all that i could/
evolved from a hood mentality/
to writin so my life goes good/
i do what i need to do to get thru hell and high water/
if i dont suceed or die imma try harder/
im still here man im still standin/
ive kilt fam got tired of scramblin/
but i will hear society ramblim/
and the only fucking hole that imma need is to stand in/
defyin commandsments, cuz i will not live my life by sumthin that another mans hand write/
its scandolous, but thats the way it is/
imma product of the hennesy fifth u gunna remember me bitch!!!!!

InfLuEnTiaLWuN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-06 09:09 PM.

Aight let me educate this kid

One..

While your in classroom being the teachers biggest fan
i was copping the smoke and postin up like a lemonade stand
With zero wins i still consider you overrated
Even at the age of 19 i find you UNeducated
Kid thinks its a GAME the way i bring the Max. pain(payne)
But i still proceed to take this kid off tracks like derailed trains
HARDLY TRYIN your numbers show the odds your up 1 to 9
Sad to say this kid slaps when he trys to throw punchlinez
Why should i blast and let off a clip or two
When i CAN already SEE THROUGH THE HOLE IN YOU(his record..0)
Its plain(plane) to see that i dont need no protection
This kids punches are like direct flight...they dont make a connection
.....Nigga likes to go to school..i prefer trouble
Kid likes oral sex..the way he BLOWS more than bubbles
While u was in school i was in the 17th precint
How u educated when your vocab isnt even decent
Even though im not a fan of diddy ima say Vote or die
Cause educate19 couldnt even vote if he tried( he doesnt have 20 posts)
I can call this nigga a pussy......the way he a teacher pet(educate)
How you gon call me a rookie..when you doesnt have your first post yet
You didnt write any of your shit aimin at me...none of yall doubt me
Cause i guarentee there wont be a personal or a punch aimed at me
And honestly i dont see how you really are comin out 'spittin
Cause i have proof that your whole fuckin verse is a writtin(aim convo..)

Fuckin kid admitted to havin his whole verse written but its all good

ME: wait how many bars did u drop
EducatedFools12: like 14
ME:and honestly......nigga ur shit had to be written....u couldnt of wrote 24 fuckin lines in 10 minutes
EducatedFools12: yeah its the verse i spit all the time
EducatedFools12: its fresh on this site though
ME: w/e its all good

Voted For: InfLuEnTiaLWuN

InfluentialWun-Your verse was structured iight man made me think you was experienced and was gunna have a tight verse. Although i was wrong. You had some simple rhyme session here...No appealing punches that were hard hitting in my opinion..you had some attempts at punches..though most were whack and played you still had much more talent than your ooppponent...just up on your creativity in punches.

Educate-First off you should write a fresh verse for every batttle dont fuckin use pre-written shit...especially if the stuff you pre-wrote was actual shit. You did not once diss your opponent you just kept rhyming...dont get me wrong rhyming is good...but its no good if you dont incorporate punches in your shit.

v/influentialwun


you told me to rtf...well you have yet to drop a vote on ne of my shit dawg....so YOU rtf please

Aight thanks for the feedback..

UPPIN...........!

VOTES...

Voted For: InfLuEnTiaLWuN

idk
both of you came wack
structure you both need to work on it in your lines are too long
and educate your lines are too short
both had weak rhyme schemes
educcates flowede better
lyricaly in took the battle he had some metaphores and personals they were weak but somewhow out matched his opponent
both of you work on your structure to improve your flow