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~~~~!sinnister Camp!~~~( Unreleased!)
My life´s a mess n´ I couldn´t care less I steal your breath and become your death Bonded by blood, a united force Angels of hell, there´s no remorse Big brother´s watching, every night n´ day The shadow riders are here to stay In battle there is no law, or so they say I roll the dice n´break you twice, my way The enemy faceless, still everywhere Your graves nameless, I´ll do my share Disciples unbound where ever u are Knights in armour, prepared for war Hair is blowing in the cold wind Summon the troops, the system can´t win Dressed in uniforms, skulls on their caps They´re on the prowl, now don´t you collapse With the big S at the wheel, they sat on the gas Marching through cities, a massacre mass Trained to torment, they were the champs Working overtime in The Sinnister camps |
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This is a str8 and dark drop...vocabs always good. I aint one to judge OM coz I dont know much about writing one really but yours is tight. just gotta slow down the turn of events. the way I do that is by trying to give each even atleast an entire bar or 2. still a str8 drop
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you need one more link or this will be closed.
-Peace- |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233346
Wtf man i leave so much god dam fucking feedback in this fourm it aint even funny Shut the fuck up and leave your links like you're supposed to. - Self |
This wasnt a bad piece..but i felt like u had a nursery rhyme flow which kinda threw me off...none the less still a decent drop.
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good drop man i like it flow preety good an the way i was spitting it out loud man it would def go nice on a beat instead of just a read but i like it it was tuff an good going nice job
8/10 |
i liked the vocab, i liked the rhymin, i thought it was pretty good
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Close it close it close it close it, PLEASE CLOSE THIS...THANKS!
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