The Consequences
 

Ya'll know you afraid,
ya'll know this is how I get paid,
my life is made.
In ya eyes I can see fear
whenever I'm near,
I can see the weakness in ya eyes queer.
I see ya legs shakin',
ya'll love these rhymes I'm makin',
these rhymes I can't be fakin'.
I see ya runnin' at the sight of me,
ya'll sucka's don't wanna fight with me,
ya see I'm the one who will take ya down,
I'm the real reason to make ya frown,
I'm the hardest motha fucka in town,
I'm the toughest sucka around,
so you gonna disrespect,
ya death is the next part in the cause and effect,
ya whole family gonna recallect,

wonderin' y did ya fuck with me,
y did ya fuck with RD,
it was a dumb thing to do,
this shit be somethin' new,
so listen to me and how I stay true,
sucka' my rhymes so sick they be like a rap flu,
sounds so good its contagious,
rhymes so outrageous,
you messin' with me so you can look courageous,
but I'll put you in ya place,
rearrange ya face,
so slow ya pace,
sucka' I produce mo' hits then Mase,
cops ain't gonna be able to solve ya murder case.
So this is just a warnin',
so don't fuck with me and ya family won't have to be mournin'.

this def sound like a verse i herd befor am trying to figuer it out but am high an babysitting so my head aint right but if am wrong you got a decent flow but i'll get back toy ou on this

i didnt steal it, i swear to god, if it sound like somethin uve heard, cool but its not bitten, or w/e u wanna call it, all me

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