RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   LBL Archives (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=385)
-   -   13. Artistik (2-1) vs 14. Eddie (1-0) (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234454)

KempoMRK 09-03-06 05:05 PM

13. Artistik (2-1) vs 14. Eddie (1-0)
 


Verses Due Thursday at 11:59PM Eastern
No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = Vote Deduction
Swaying = Vote Deduction
Must Vote On Four Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Saturday Night
New Battles Up Sunday Morning
For Full Rules Click Here

Slay-Eddie.. 09-03-06 05:32 PM

imma flawless you..

Multi 09-03-06 06:37 PM

check...


yea u believe that

10 line


http://community.rapverse.com/showp...33&postcount=10
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...54&postcount=11
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...60&postcount=10
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...06&postcount=14

Slay-Eddie.. 09-03-06 07:02 PM

..match...............

Multi 09-06-06 10:41 PM

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school



ok so i don't care bout this leauge... couldn't no-show




6 bitch

Slay-Eddie.. 09-07-06 12:09 AM

haha..

First off - ya lines are repitive and unoriginal..
Hell, i could mock ya whole damn style..
..But i ain't tryna send Butler a subliminal..
N i heard about ya girl - dat relationship's not doin good..
..But its' ironic how WE call her Lady Luck the way she knockin on wood..
Keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..N leave you pleased as punch - gun, and some other violent shit..

Multi 09-07-06 12:24 AM

vote up...


*looks @ kempo ... u made me not care*

Multi 09-07-06 04:36 PM

wtf... vote u assholes

fuck yuu 09-08-06 11:31 AM

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name

vs

Nothing

Eddie i wastn really feeling any of your shit i've seen it all before and your wording wasnt good at all

v/Art

Multi 09-08-06 01:40 PM

1-0....



dmn this shit slow

DaTrusHurtz 09-08-06 02:16 PM

lol @ a 6 line battle... its so short i'll do it bar by bar

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
seen some similar concepts, but its still personal so its okay
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
eh, seen a bunch of last letter type things.. kinda bland
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school
another decent nameplay

vs.

First off - ya lines are repitive and unoriginal..
Hell, i could mock ya whole damn style..
..But i ain't tryna send Butler a subliminal..
wording seemed to be a bit indirect on this
N i heard about ya girl - dat relationship's not doin good..
..But its' ironic how WE call her Lady Luck the way she knockin on wood..
seems a bit played, but pretty cool
Keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..N leave you pleased as punch - gun, and some other violent shit..
I'm just not a fan of these "violent" type punches

I wish Artistik hadn't come with 3 nameplays, that kinda took away from his verse and if I had seen more nameplays on Eddie I'd prolly give him this, but i haven't so most of that was fresh. Eddie, I feel like you beat around the bush sometimes when you write. You got the idea, you just don't come as directly at him as you could.

Vote - Artistik

Wordz AhGod 09-08-06 06:58 PM

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school

vs

First off - ya lines are repitive and unoriginal..
Hell, i could mock ya whole damn style..
..But i ain't tryna send Butler a subliminal..

This was a decent battle, kinda hard to judge coz of its lack of lines but still decent drops on both sides.
Art came with some good Nameplays and punches in his verse. Eddie ..your stuff was good too but It lacked good wording, and good punches. the knock on wood line was ok but could have been better if worded more properly man.

V/ Artistik

RTF in my battle with Euthanize please...

Multi 09-09-06 05:37 PM

3-0....



i think i'll stay in next week... see if i wanna give a effort

Sonny Dimebags 09-10-06 12:06 AM

Artistik -i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school

Eddie-N i heard about ya girl - dat relationship's not doin good..
..But its' ironic how WE call her Lady Luck the way she knockin on wood..

Thiss battle was meeehhh Art got him wit the 3 last letters line
vote-Artistik

J. Luth 09-10-06 12:37 AM

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school

vs

nothing

v/Artisik


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:33 PM.