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The West Aint Dead ft. Balance
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4402173
Check it out new song FUCKIN FIRE we on that mixtape music!!! this is real shit!!! drop links if u want feed Links ------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234199 ===== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234364 |
Beat: Dre.... Chronic 2001....
Over dubs on this track.... kinda have you sounding like Kon... lol... 1st Verse: flow and delivery is tight... no complaints there... you on that Gangsta shit here.... the vocals is soundin tyte.... juss them over Dubs... LMAO... Hook: Simple... but effective for this track.. 2nd Verse: Ya boi here got a swagger... but it seems a tad forced.. sounds like a young Game... lol... but he did his thing.... 7.5/10 RTF |
i liek the fade out of the dre beat obviously sends a nice message
like the hook sends a cool message verse had nice flow i like the ovedubbs lyrically you came nice delivery ws cool your boy balance is kinda hot sounds like hes tryign to be game so he sounds kinda fake to me his flow is good his vocals are a little too loud i mena really the hook made the track you came really nice on it rtf- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545 |
this track is aiight but in general it's pretty simple cuz it's just a "rep my set" type track...beat's real laid back, which works for and against you cuz you shouldn've came harder on this beat to make the track harder hook's simple but that fit, verses could've been better though those were rather simple as well R.T.F. please |
Beat = appropriate for this track
vibe = chill = not bad PT...real smooth and mellow...I liked it. Hook: Decent...could have more ooomph 2nd cat...nice flow Both Emcees repped on this 7/10 track tho 1 |
The WEST IS DEAD WHEN IT FALL OFF THE U.S. but on the real this track was nice.. I was feelin it. EVerything flowed nicely. RTF on my new track
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Pretty decent track from my boy past tense
First verse: was nice and smooth but it sounded like the first bar was a lil scratchy for you to do but it got smoother, cool flow. Hook was ehh, aight i really needed a west track for my rv mixtape anyway, it was cool i'm just not a big west fan but yall repped it on this next verse balance was a little loud but he was serious bout his, his flo was off the chain and stuff but both verses were too laid back for their own good overall i give it a 7/10 this was a cool track though rtf on the track back with link later |
haha - illy beat, aint heard this in a minute. Quality is good on the first verse. Nice effect on the intro too. Adlibs seem off a bit, but I kinda like how you tryna make em real breathy for a two way feel on one verse. Always a nice touch. Verse seems a little basic wordplay wise, but it's jus basically tellin people what you bout so I feel you. 2nd dude - quality seems a little worse, but still not bad. I like this dudes voice, its somethin different. Good verse. Nice track, ionno bout the bridge outro thing tho. It's aight. word. Overall pretty good.
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