Once You Go Black
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=303064
^That's all you need^

It feels so great to be back...well actually nah not really it's just something to do. So i've made a decent track with no metaphors at all yea peep what i show or you reap what you sow.










http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234473 we get it poppin
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234536 The west IS dead
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545 A bunch of bodily fluids
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234412 Pop vs. son
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234618 Pockets swollen
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233886 Wack Niggas

beat i dont really like it but its ok
you gotta lisp i an tell
i lik the flow on the second verse better flwo was pretty good throughout
hook is ok kinda boring to me but its ok
overal pretty cool track jsut seems kinda rushed

checkin it out now

I'm feelin that intro lol thats some real shit!!!

beats nice westcoast I love it

Hook is cool......if that was behind some iller quality it'd be nice

I'm really feelin the lyrics on this shit...for the verse..sounds pretty tight u gotta do this on some decent gear u know what i mean........this aint too bad man

keep it up

I don't have a lisp it was just 7 30 and i aint really feel like dictatin.

But thanks for the feed yea I think the quality was good cause my mic was $6. LMAO


uppin

Yeah man.....step the quality up on this and it's a banger man. I'm feeling this dude. I saw the title and had to peep.....lol. It was nice though.....you got some hot shit mixed up in there :thumbup:

Is this directed at a white person?


anyway...like the beat and flow on this

listening on my lap top so I won't comment on overall quality. But, it sounds good from here.

slick track bro



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The beat and flow was all nicely well done. Everything was chosen nicely on here. i wish i had the same audio capabilities but everything was nice man. Keep up the good work.

not directed at white people, i'm BLACKmage, so once you go me, you never go back to normal rap i guess.

i like it...i like your style...just fuckin buy a new mic....damn what you waitin on?

Fuck a new mic son

at least a 20 dollar one....damn.....thats all i have at the moment......