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well flow wasnt really good from my view idk
to flow it youd have to stretch your syllables gay how you bold to point out the shit that rhymes idk lyrically weak ps wheres your links dumbass dont get yourself banned form the open mic forum |
2 links or this will be closed
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this needs some work, but theres potential on here nah mean, you need to work on ya flow a little more it was kinda choppy. also just try n make ya word play a little wittier, but keep doin ya thing
holla at my link freal.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235120 |
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