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Poetry In My Opinion...
Poetry in my opinion.... music melodies possesing my heart story's telling me love is never to far writing from within spilling my emotions hand clamping my pen words running free like the ocean no start or end my mind never quits poetry is my friend failure i'll never admit for my words and writing is which i speak through there's nothing to be hiding rather it's fiction or true poetry is a way to express if it wasn't for she i'd have alot less reminding me to be me and to relieve the stress releasing feeling through each sentence i really never hold back for everything's my opinion it helps me relax a poet i am, creating music poetry is fun which is why i choose not to abuse it. |
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Very nice, your structure was pretty on i liked all of it except where you put stress with sentace, i thought it ran one to many sillibals but other than that i was pretty dope and supported your topic well, good shit valor, keep droppin!
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word good lookin and i put less with stress but no biggie good feed dude thanks
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upping this shizzleswizzle
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thsi was kool
short sweet yet nicely put and complex in a way..did a nice job. the inner rhyming and little storyline that went along with it aswell was just fantastic man nice job valor!..keep at it man.. RTF on broken pianists!. last link in the sig |
ya dig
em hmmmmm yall should of enjoyed this while it lasted my last piece ever possibly on rv yet ill still be doing collabs |
Good shtuff as alwase valor.....the topic was tight but i felt tword the end of the poem you started to force your rhyme
. Example: a poet i am, creating music poetry is fun which is why i choose not to abuse it.. . it really sounded like you were trying to hard to find a decent ending...next time just dont force it...but yeah a dope drop either way . . best part: . poetry is my friend failure i'll never admit for my words and writing is which i speak through there's nothing to be hiding |
lol---good too see i still got some left n her tank
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sup son..
man we need som deep activity in here... |
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