Don't Let Us ft. Fluent Flo (will rtf!!!)
 

www.myspace.com/paranoidxl

or

www.soundclick.com/paranoid05

Verse1: Fluent Flo
Verse2: Paranoid

feed links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3080466
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3080459

Lets see.....

Fluent Flo-
seem a little new.....the draggin of ur words were a little annoyin. again this aint my kinda track so i might just be a hater.
Paranoid-
I like your verse alot better than Flo's. better presence and better lyrics as well. u are more comfortable on the mic. but like I told u on aim. Love aint my thing so........take it however u want it.....i rather rip sum ones throat out than talk about sum one special in my life. ;)

fluent fell of a few times and dragged his werds out......didnt like his verse much....
yourz was much better better flow...lyrics....presence....just overall a better verse.....
keep dropin and tha shit will imporve sorry for ta shity feed ill get chu next track
just wasnt feelin this one

ight im listening beat is kinda fruity if ya ask me ....but its decent first verse sounds like there was a lot of clips cuz i can sum shit distorted lyrics was coo para you sound a lil monotone but ya lyrics made up fo it needs mo presence on the mic overall this was decent decent drop keep doin you

listening....

beat's cool, I like it. Fluent sounds really new to this, like it's his first or second time on the mic. Flow wasn't too fluent :(. Paranoid sounds a little better on this than I'm used to hearing him on. Flow was nice, but delivery could have been better. A little too monotone for my taste, but definitely one of the better tracks I've heard him on.....