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Houdini 10-02-06 11:52 AM

Internet Beef isnt real? Wrong
 
If I'd kill myself this world would be in perfect silence
The voices in my head...told me to write this
Scriptures in my eye lids, enscribed with psycho violence
This crowd is slowly dying, suicide.....I might go try this....

This world is ugly..it always seems like noone cares
Im not approchable...so stay back You wouldnt dare
Seeing images of faces...that wasnt really there
Walking in the dark with no light,there everywhere

Creeping in my dreams, destroying my reality
Just a nightmare...kill them all and smile happily
This joy when I smash these fools is my fatality
My head is silenced...But I will kill anything in the path of me

Its like throwing a watch off a plane...you can see how time flys
I refer to myself as 10 people...I wish the other 9 would die
Peeps step on my toes Like internet beef isnt real?
Better check again..I'll find you...you aint 2 distant 2 kill

Before you quote me, you better get your facts quick
My people your peoples.....I have more connections than sprint
I bury these bitches...killing there familys....no snitches
I wound..before I bruise...your newest graves the ditches

Tippin your head up when your dead nigga ....sky is the limit
Torture corpses...give em blood 2 stay alive...so u die by the minute
I will drive by your grave, just to laugh at your family mournin
And then leave...and kill your bestfriends...cuz funerals are boring'

Houdini 10-02-06 11:57 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234974
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235023

Houdini 10-02-06 06:31 PM

Damn, SOmeone read this uppin.

Hitchcock 10-10-06 03:08 PM

this was ight son but nobody on this sight prolly gonna give you any feed cuz they all about this soft shit on this site. but keep doin ya thing you got an ight flow you should work onthat, just a little bit and try n put some punches in there to make ya verse sound more creative. ight son, hit me back on my shit.............

links are in the sig

allikwarawkilla 10-10-06 05:11 PM

lol like it describes me....lol j/k but i feel ya homie niggaz on the net act like they cant b touched but ill tell u 4 a fact it happens..good drop short but kool

Houdini 10-13-06 01:44 PM

Thanks for the feedback guys Uppin this

Multi 10-13-06 05:21 PM

lol this was funny... like tru funny... yea alotta niggas talk shit on the web... some might actually pertray the same on the street's... but there's alot who just are flat out pussies... but truth be told we will never know unless we actually know that person off of the web.. which 9 outta 10 the people doing the shit talking is the one's we don't know..s oyea this was coo..


n word @hitch.... everyone want's some artistik peice about lava flow revering to life.... lmfao

Houdini 10-16-06 12:33 PM

Uppin
 
Thanks for uppin this. Word...Hitch has some nice collabs.

WhoAmI 10-16-06 02:07 PM

yeh i feel you disrespectin someone is disrespectin someone no matter how its done

aite piece fam coulda used better wordplay to make them bars come across more raw though but s'all jigga.

keep doin what you do

~peace~

Young Fear 10-16-06 08:12 PM

I liked this shit. It was tough to me. keep doing your thing.

EMacro 10-17-06 12:43 AM

pretty ill flow... that time fly shit was wack tho'. lol c'mon. i liked the rest this shit though

Houdini 10-18-06 08:34 PM

haha Thanks for the feed, and the clock line was writers block. Uppin

Young Sin 10-20-06 10:49 AM

shit was nice for real... keep comin wit it dog


Chosen The Alpha and Omega

Houdini 10-22-06 02:45 PM

uppin this, damn

SQUAD-UP 10-25-06 11:44 AM

this was a good drop shawty, you got a nice flow, some parts kinda fell off here n there, but overall it was pretty tight patna. only thing i would work on is some punches, because some bars were kind of repetitive in that sense. ya feel me?

Before you quote me, you better get your facts quick
My people your peoples.....I have more connections than sprint
^^^that was my favorite bar, it had the best wordplay..
stay up homie.....holla at y aboy.....wit some feedback


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