some werd thing i wrote JC
 

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Got this crunk shit ,yeah bitches rollin’ hard
Got my chain rollin, 24 inches 2 far
Got these kidz dealing that cocaine resadew
Fuck u up quickesta so what tha fuck u gun do?
U cant do shit when the barrels in ur eyes
Cock that gun up, blow ur brains to the sky
U cant do shit now ur bodies on that pavement
u cant do shit hoe u part of my enslavement
Fuck wit me, bitch ur gunna get fucked back
Sex is not the issue when im pulling out my gat
Its part of that angel that tells u to be good
Its that 187 that’s runnin through ur hood
Im not a gangsta, fuck, im not even close
My lines flowin quicker than rips in panty hoes
But that’s not the problem, its ur fucking face
Punch u so hard bitch ,death is all u taste

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.................................................u ppy

uppy.........,,.,

eh... kinda random lines like ur not really talkin about anything... stay up.

eeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhh critz is ok keep um coming

hmm no hate but i dont think u wrote this, you dont go from rapping about babysittin and 5 dollars worth of weed to this, just seems suspicious

wat u talking about u saying that this is to good to be mine or u saying it dont sound like me i did write this ask troublesome , fuck unno babysitting money not good enough 4 me????lol

This was alright I guess, nothing to blow my brains out about !! I expect better
from you now to be fair.

i hear ya...................

It was aight there was a couple good lines but up your vocab words like sex gun etc.. can be upgraded into sinful intercourse and reaper of life... ya feel me make the reader think instead of just them reading the same old words.


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