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exposing tha industry(mixtape single hott ish)conspiracy theories!!!!!!!!
www.myspace.com/yaboitroublesome
top track http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235652 ecko-x gotz my head^^ linkz^^^ |
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Listenin'....
feelin' the scratches at the beggining..fa'real this beat is serious.... 1st dude - quality ain't that great, however flow is pretty solid throughout, got some nice multis going through, lyrics are aight...they decent...delivery is aight but gets monotonous real quick needs to fluctuate a lil.. Hook - feeling the beat, really makes this song better....yah hook is pretty nice need to do effects on it..good on an amateur level... Troublesome - yeah dude u got a unique type flow and the way ya voice goes is good...flow is good...delivery good...and liking the presence...feeling the switch ups...lyrics again decent... Pretty good track..1 |
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uppped...................com on i fucking left tons of feed none wanna bring tey lazy ass to do this
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listenin
.. a cum line? nah... but i like the flow i can actually catch ya lyrics, stay on flow good, i like the muti sylible rhymes... u sound like u need to raise your highs in your EQ's. chorus is str8 the way it is, im diggin it, a few adlibs in it prolly would make it a lil hyper. good mixin wit the beggin and endings... pretty decent. werd... and thnx for the feed in my thread, i like how u actually gave chritism instead of nut huggin, werd.... ya need a lil more ups and downs and switch a flow a lil to make it more appealin and less monitone, good shit for what your goin for i guess, not my style but werd |
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