25. D.Stroyer (0-0) vs 26. Da Saviour (0-0)
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i am guessing this is me?? if it is check check
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my internet was down most of the day yesterday but if it is straight i can key up a verse real quick...
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key'd up
I'll put cha face in the dirt...i'm rapein this pussy, bitch pull up ya skirt/ this shit is the worst..but you a herb and i'm not, yes, The Truth really Hurts/ you battlin a vet..you aint posin a threat...there's no way you can have this win/ it seem like every time i turn around you in a battle or votin for the person you battlin!/ fuckin pus, this shit ain't a game, your elementary style you should be ashamed/ from the simple metaphors to the outrageous play in ya name/ if that is wordplay than playing wit words is somethin that i don't wanna do/ But hol up let me drop down so i can be on the same level as you/ you win by no-shows, you won't go far after my verse busta/ tryin to be cool by votin for your opponent its obvious D.S. is a Dick Sucka/ e.z... *lost to the truth hurts |
Eh D.Stroyer no-shows
v/Da saviour |
^^^ can i get some criticism??
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I'll put cha face in the dirt...i'm rapein this pussy, bitch pull up ya skirt/
this shit is the worst..but you a herb and i'm not, yes, The Truth really Hurts/ eh i get what you saying here even withou the explantations but the punch wsnt really delivered that hard so it made for a meh punch you battlin a vet..you aint posin a threat...there's no way you can have this win/ it seem like every time i turn around you in a battle or votin for the person you battlin!/ eh didnt realy like this.. wording was bad n the punch aint really connect/ aint make to much sence fuckin pus, this shit ain't a game, your elementary style you should be ashamed/ from the simple metaphors to the outrageous play in ya name/ This was alright... alot better then the other two punches so far if that is wordplay than playing wit words is somethin that i don't wanna do/ let me drop down so i can be on the same level as you/ eh okay concept but your wording made it not connect really... set up was iight punch was eh you win by no-shows, you won't go far after my verse busta/ tryin to be cool by votin for your opponent its obvious D.S. is a Dick Sucka/ this was coo. Iigh theres your feed hope it helps ya out man... you just need to elevate a bit and you'll be all set.. Hit up my battle with that indian dude spul |
sorry about that guys, there was something important that came up & i had to go ASAP n was not able to write a verse nothing n again sorry bout the no-show, it won't happen again next week
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D.Stroyer no-shows.
Da Saviour wins (1-0) D.Stroyer loses (0-1) |
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