Back with THA VISIONARY (ORIGINAL BEAT)
 

yo i'm back some of y'all don't remember me cause i didn't make too much noise around here but i knew y'all wouldn't do any dick ridin and just tell it to me straight so i'ma give y'all some tracks...this is goin on a lil mixtape that's gonna be sold here in indy....i recorded it a month ago so just let me know what ya think

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4372414

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3090823
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...824#post3090824


i'll rtf

flow is ok kinda choppy really
lyrically cool
dont liek the beat really
hook is cool but i dont like your delivery on it and the last line sounded funny to me idk your adlibs need to be fixed on it
i think you need some more energy


overall 5/10

i really hate this beat

listnin..........dont like this beat........too plain........
voice is ight kinda......i unno .......its dif......lyrics is cool.......flow is on point exept ta telescope line fell off there.......sounds like uu switcehd from text not long ago...not sure if u did...but ....any way hook was boring to me...good lyrics just wasnt feelin it...
second verse......sum ight lines here.......sum sooo so......sum were pretty ill.......
hook aagain.....blah to me.....................this was an ight piece.......hATED THA BEAT
flow was on for tha most part soo..not bad keep droppin fo sho

right on for the honest feed peeps....i been rappin on the mic for a long time and can't get the flow down but i'ma get it down one of these days....again thanks for the feed

uppin this....leave links i'll rtf

flow is strate.......delivery gets it done........da lyrics could be upped...i mean ya had some punchlines but nuttin that made me go whoa......not bad thoe keep droppin.......

right on...uppin