High thinking
 

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I lead a life filled with crime
yeah, im stuck in the streets
Im steady losing peace of mind
Cause of cops on the beat
So where do I go to whom do I turn?
Im headed to eternal damnation, forever I'll burn
and never I'll learn.., Cause im still stuck in my ways
Im stuck in a daze
like a bat ive lost sight, yea im stuck in a cave
Im stuck in a maze
Im trapped and my mind is a haze
Things no longer makes since ive lost track of my days
So now i will blaze
Just to feel oh so glorious
Im ready to die, so now i feel oh so notorious
But still im on a quest and ive veered from my path
and knowledge is the water that i use for my bath



Uppin for feedback



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204207
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235577

u aint gon get no feedback till u get some links up in this muthafucka
are ya'll that stupid that u cant read the rules
havent u figured out why u aint gettin no feed when people dont follow the rules??

we need a mod cause this is gay

I've been giving feedback on others's shit since Ive been here. Just forgot to put up links.

Uppin. Let me know what's hood

then why dont u???...show proof that u left feed or no one gon think u did
just cuz the mods are gone dont mean u cant respect the rulez round here

What the fuck you talking bout? I edited fresh links in already. They at the bottom of my verse.

^^lmao just fuckin witcha

still need thoughts

im thinkin im hungry

If you aint gonna give feedback on the piece then dont post in this thread. Still uppin for feedback.

???????????? Damn, niggas cant give no feedback?

still uppin. Where the fuck is niggas at?

shawty this was actually decent, from the look of the verse itself i wasn't expectin it to be any good. but you got a pretty good flow, and some ight attempt at punches. So the only thing i would work on is ya punches or multies.....

holla at me on my shit..........links are in the sig

bout time I got some feed. Good looking duke. still uppin