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DaTrusHurtz 10-24-06 01:00 AM

Group D: Te Ora vs. Lord of Pens
 
This is it fellas! This is the first week of Season 2! There's a $50 cash prize coming up this season. Start off the season with a win or risk falling into a hole that you can't get out of. Sorry about getting these matches up late, a lot of work came up. It shouldn't happen again. I'm keeping the same due dates. You guys should still have plenty of time to drop. Just remember to vote. I'd hate to have to DQ people because they didn't vote.

Battler #1: Te Ora
Battler #2: Lord of Pens

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.

Te Ora 10-25-06 04:17 AM

check..




it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.

Lord of Pens 10-26-06 04:50 PM

^WOW

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?
It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,

Te Ora 10-27-06 12:44 AM

Quote:
Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?


damz son that's original..

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Brown
Im takin but still chick huntin, wont b a prob nah, i doubt it
I'll either b fuckin ShanTe Ora bitch this dude used 2 go out wit




flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face

Roger Glocks 10-27-06 06:02 AM

lord of pens

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?

^^aight cool concept even if it has been done...it kinda stretched tho..like the idea

It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,

^^aight decent...i just dont like the set up...cuz i was expecting a name play but ok punch


te ora

it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.

^^ this was nice ...felt the set up lead into the punch..smooth


flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face

^ aight both ways. cuz if your saying 'wit knee to the face' seems kinda forced but its aight...but if your not lol..its still an ok line...both ways its decent ..dont u wish her name was whitneys lol

i liked te ora had one really nice line...and one decent line compared to lord's 2 decent lines


vote-te ora

grams 10-27-06 06:28 AM

it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.
--this was ok but it was more of an angry statement
flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face
--lol, i liked this one.

vs

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?
--ehh, didnt really like this one, wording was bad plus it wasnt hard hitting
It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,
--ehh....should have been better

vote/teora

vote on mine fuckers

Diet Coke 10-27-06 04:25 PM

Te Ora
it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood
Not too bad..
flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face
Best punch of the battle..

Lord of Pens
Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?
Nah..
It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,
Seen similar shit to this before many times..[b]

Vote: [b]Te Ora
, took it in my eyes.

R.Christensen 10-27-06 04:43 PM

Te: first punch was pretty shitty nameplay
second was good... but needed rewording

Pens: first punch has been used
second was worded fucking horribly

v/ Te

Possible 10-27-06 04:58 PM

Rofl.

t's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.
alright nameplay, pretty good diss here.
flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face
lol cool wordplay and nice flip on what he done already.

vs.

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?
Too obvious and not to mention it was done, pretty much the same way before
It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,
Meh, there is too many punches like this for this to be considered originial or witty.

Im gonna go with Te, for coming a lil harder with the lines and nameplays. Also the second lines were good for a feeding diss and explaining how its been used.

V. Te Ora

Possible 10-27-06 05:09 PM

Edit these in plz.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236319
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236317
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236315
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236314

Possible 10-27-06 05:10 PM

Rofl sorry man wrong thread.

Te Ora 10-27-06 06:56 PM

^ lmao..

here's mine thus far:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236318
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236314
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236319
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236329
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236324

Valiant 10-27-06 07:04 PM

it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.
--this was ok but it was more of an angry statement
flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face
--lol, i liked this one.

vs

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?
--ehh, didnt really like this one, wording was bad plus it wasnt hard hitting
It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,
--ehh....should have been better


ye Te got his

v/Te Ora

D.Stroyer 10-28-06 02:32 AM

v/te

t's 1st punch was bad, 2nd iight needed better wording

lop 1st punch was bad n' so was the 2nd

Wyte 10-28-06 12:40 PM

it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.
This was decent
flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face
Lol nice'

vs

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?
^lol cool
It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,
Could have been better


Vote - Te


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