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beat is real laid back. i like that.
i guess that was the hook. a little too much though. i think you'd wanna make it a little more simple. adlibs are cool verse 1 was alright. in the beginning your flow was a little strange. lyrics arent spectacular. nothing stood out. it was cool though. hook again..too much. verse 2 was okay. again..nothing too special honestly it was a cool song. its something to jus chill and listen to while you wash your car or something. the lyrics are a little strange cause it doesnt seem to match the topic during certain parts. thats the only real problem i see. and the typewriter kinda has nothing to do with the song. i like the sound of the song. it jus kinda doesnt come together for me. |
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hmm..i aint feeling beat! your delivery is kinna ugh..u didnt mix ur vocals like u always do..no effects! you got the right presence on this... hook is iight your flows were all the same..meh they were iight.. i honestly wasnt feeling this track idk..shud be the beat or something! hit my sig bruh.. and when are u getting stuff done? |
Imma still record on that 1 track
as soon as I get a chance to record its gettin ripped trust me! |
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