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Got The Slump On Hi
GOT THE SLUMP ON HI
verse1: i got the slump on hi lettin niggas by little niggas cry as i cruise in my ride i bump to the side showin niggas that i tried showin niggas i got pride showin niggas i got 9's i bump through the line people thinkin it's a crime people thinkin it's not right people thinkin who's this guy i don't care wat people think...as long as im in line no im no nsync...i GOT THE SLUMP ON HI hook: GOT THE SLUMP ON HI(x till beat drops) verse2: yes it's veres numba 2 i made it wit out u i made it wit out drew i made it wit out beef stew thats 2 show u a kid like me can make it no i didn't fake no i didn't break it no i didn't out take it that's wat i had 2 do yes nigga that's da truth if u don't believe me just ask da crew nigga... ain't...no...lie i...got...wat...belongs...of...mine i...GOT.....THE SLUMP ON HI hook outro: yeah...that's ya boy KEMIST aka J-360,credits to Dub's Attic, *HA..HA..HA,PEEACE!!! |
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Yo I Need Some Feed
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That was gay...keep at it...I wasn't even that bad when i started on RV, and if I was I dare u too post it in here...
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look tino........u could of at least give me some tips instead of sayin it was gay
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it was kinda basic, it would sound good on audio with a slow flow
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Get e.zy and freezy, dont make me have to spam ur thread now!
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wats e.zy and freezy
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E.zy and Freezy is when you get Nova Caines Grizzy.. ^^
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Didnt like it. Grab a concept and write about it and try some punchlines or play with your word or something. Just keep practicing.
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first off structure was horrible sorry but it was..work on that
second off ur rhyming REALLY REALLY basic wordz up ur rhyming scheme 3rd off make it more interesting it got boring fast im not gonna rate this cuz i dont wanna hurt ur feelings lol but try ur best ta elevate some and become better RTF on mine wit honest feed back it called "hip hops cemetary" holla |
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