'' Life is Crazy''
 

ya see my life gets crazier each second i live it/
living life in the fast lane im a ride to the finish/
but if i finish before my time has come/
rest easy all my soldiers i lived and died by the gun/
see its hotter than hell when you riding on top/
thinking your untouchable theres no way youll be stopped/
but/
you never know what tomarrow could bring/
you could be slanging the rock/
or pushing the range/
when some niggas run up on you and pop three in ya frame/
you wont know what hit you till ya mommas crying in the rain/
but see thats just part of the game/
you gotta put ya life on the line if you wanna get fame/
its 5 stars and 3 for the stripes/
thats truth love loyalty wisdom and honor for life/
thats the code that i live by and trust me i get by/
but yeah lifes depressing thats why i stay high/
ill blow smoke to the sky watching time fly by/
while im writing these rhymes knowing one day ill die/
but thats one thing that i hope happens later than sooner/
cuz if it happend sooner than later/
id never know if im destined to be greater than pac was/
6 months before he got shot up/
to all my soldiers locked down like the trapped in a box/
impatiently waiting to get out liek a jack in the box/
and once they do they back in just for slanging the rock/
its a vicious cycle so tell me when does it stop/
the truth is it never does
till you take a slow ride in a hearse
and whats worse is its a gift & a curse
ive put in work and done dirt now im spitting a verse/
and ive had my heart broken but ive never been hurt/
we got pastor mase joining with the snitches division/
i thought they tought him better than that in the catholic religion/
aint a unanimus desicion this a tko./
a lyrical hommicide no a verbal deathstroke ya know/
and its a shame how that beef can creep/
youll think someones ya boy till they catch you asleep/
thats y i make it a point never to sleep/
i got my eyes wide open and my ears to the streets/
i cant lose man failure isnt in my vocabulary/
but for some reason all of my adversaries /
still try to test me cops try to arrest me
what is it thats hexed me or is it a blessing/
i cant tell man and trust its got me stressing/
and now my backs to the wall cuz this is my lesson/
to the weak the strong and the powerless/
cuz this song aint for beef just empowerment/

and constructive critisism form the people of rv would be much apreciated this is going to be on my demo so i need to know what i should tweak or not
good lookin out soldiers stay up

Decent verse homy. multis were okay. Nothing special but still good.Same with punchlines. 6/10

I liked the verse, I would like to here it on audio tho... Return the Fav. and Vote For the battle verse on my Battle with Flip

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