"I can see for miles"...deep joint...& NEW
 

http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox

^^Click on "I can see for miles"

Beat: Jay devo productions...or something like that
Sample: In the hook...lyrics "I can see for miles" takin from The Who
Hook: Tha Q
Verses 1 & 2: Q


Concept: This track is a lyrical expression of my self perception. I'm relaying what I see as my destiny in God on track. I sharing my vision for my life and speaking things into existence. Hence, the theme 'I can see for miles"


Holla


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PS...I don't have a proper set up. So, the quality is compromised...This is one I plan to re-record when I get a new mic.


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236457
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236453

QUALITY.........ok now thats over it was aight for me dawg<---randy jackson styles

Flow was there but the beat was kinda bland and im a fan for guitars and shit but to repetative for my liking .....you are definately someone who thinks out the box which makes u unique in a game of similarities ....i enjoyed this track for its standout personality

Listenin'...I don't really like the beat, I like the melody you had for "I can see for miles"...but it dont fit the beat it doesnt fit ...flow was good..dont rlly feel all the shoutin this track like a rock song nah mean ain't my typa shit bruh, lyrics are koo nothin standing out...flow and delivery were good...wasnt feeling this that much but do ya thing

errrrrrrrr uppin







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Quality seems to get worse and worse man. Flow in the beginning was nice, but then it sounded kinda off for a few bars, then back to alright. Seems real inconsistent to me man. Lyrics weren't bad.


Track had more wrong with it than right though....that quality is killing you man.

i know you already said this before..but the quality isnt too good. it kinda kills the whole song.

not feelin the beat..it jus sounds like a bunch of noise. lyrics are average. nothing spectacular. ouch the quality is killin when you get louder. that "i can see for miles" doesnt really match the beat. the note that you sing in is too low. second verse is better lyrically. flow i like a lot. really feelin these lyrics a lot more.

so what do you classify yourself as? what genre? just rap? or christian rap?

^^Preciate the feed...I classify myself as...other I guess

I dunno...rap




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Listening...

Beat is meh...

Blahhh at the quality, but you already mentioned this on AIM.

Flow was good, the concept was creative...lyrics were good too, but the quality just hurts the delivery and the listenability of the song.

Get a new mic stat man lol.

Decent though. Keep it up.

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236476