First Keystyle
 

somethin quicC what do yall think....my first keystyle on here....feedbacC plz


pushed to the edge, i could cause mass devastation
waitin, facin, hatin what has become of our nation
relations wit other nations, kept a secret from the citizens
innocence civilians gettin killed, because of our presidents ignorance
In Memory of, is the only thing they say for rememberance
Desert Storm to now, is how long we have suffered since
from generation to generation they(bushs) just pass on the torch
until a nuclear missle comes and lands on our front porch
then nuclear winter comes thru and wipes out every living race
sometimes i think to my self what would be left to take our place
we will never no, even if or when that day approaches and pass
only thing we can do is pray for the future and appreciate the past


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236434

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3101162

uppin..........

nice shitt good jobb mayne...

Bump, Bump, Bump it up

shit Cuzz this was str8 fiiiire on some real that was real talk i was feelin the topic

yo fam good shit playboy you kept it real talkn bout the shit goin on in the world punches wernt that bad either man i give you an 8/10 which is decent because i dont rate shit like that but man all i gotta say is Get the water we dont want the kid the to catch fire!!

honestly...you guys say how good you are and everything..thinkin youre the hottest thing on this site and i still dont see why.

now to give feedback on this...your topic was cool. although on these boards those kinda topics are played already..lyrically nothing stood out too much. i think the best part was the bar about the presidents ignorance.

it was cool.

decent spit mayn keep up

lol decent stuff, pretty nice....

Implicit we never said we tha best, I think you might have got that impresssion from our Crews name.

This was actually decent.

relations wit other nations, kept a secret from the citizens
innocence civilians gettin killed, because of our presidents ignorance
^^^
Nice.

That's about it. You could've of elaborated on the topic more, but you may blame the shortness of the verse on it being your first keystyle. Topic is played, but I see it like an opinion, I like to hear everyones. Stay up.

-Skyll-