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-   -   17. Rap Disciple (1-0) vs 18. SL.Valentino (1-0) (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236794)

KempoMRK 11-05-06 10:53 AM

17. Rap Disciple (1-0) vs 18. SL.Valentino (1-0)
 


Verses Due Thursday at 11:59PM Eastern
No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = Vote Deduction
Swaying = Vote Deduction
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Marksmen. 11-06-06 08:17 PM

Checkin in... 16 sound good ?

Valiant 11-07-06 02:11 PM

Check::
Who-ever posts firsts sets the limit....

Valiant 11-09-06 03:40 PM

Match me Twenty lines RD

This nigga gotta be clueless...
I can C-Rap Disciple lickin' ass...makin' home improvements
He doesn't know, I'm not just an opponent
I bring war, chaos, corruption to leave him boneless...
So keep talking that bullshit...
The Glock leaves Disciples fucked...Like a Messiah Crucifix...
Chugging that dick - running that pipe - grinding that shit
smoking that white, He gots to be fucked...
Just try to insult me...I'll leave your face brewed in Shit like Civet Coffee*
I battle Masters - not no fucking Disciple
Defeating you - brings to no gain to my title...Here's the snub faggit...
Read between the Brackets (YOUR SHIT)
The only time your gettin' cover is when your under the matress...
To rapverse your useless - I'll quit if I lose this
Your Flow clouts like blood - Your last battle ripped Tulips
-This clown will get bucked!-
Please deliver the message, I'll leave you hung high like Judas
Cause of your snitching movements....
~Take time, I proved this chump is worthless~
~A rapper without a purpose~
~You couldn't diss me twice, If Jesus spat 16 verses~


*Civet Cats eat beans then shit them out, to be used as coffee beans...eww

Valiant 11-09-06 03:43 PM

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Marksmen. 11-09-06 05:36 PM

Battle rapping, I should've gave you a chance to learn the shit.
cause beating you is 'no contest' like 'canceled tournaments'
Slam and burn this bitch, you wasted ya time voting this week
keep ya eyes open, cause you about to get a KO in a blink!
You sat down, with a pen & pad, and wrote what you think
about my text.. posted it, thought I was owned and then sinked
But your pen is too small to clash with a God of my stature.
you have no vocab, intelligence, talent.....
which makes you an average rapper!
I talked to SL. about dope emcees, but he tried ways to stop it.
began talking about himself, and I said "can we please stay on topic?"
I'm sorry, but it's true... battling me'll get you beyond murked.
he's so whack, he's apart of the audience... at his own concert!
He got drunk and performed, kicked off stage, and floored, kid
went home, saw his concert on tape.....
and booed his own performance!
And don't worry about fame, you'll be well known in the street.
they'll say "Hey, aren't you the dude RD crushed last week?"
The guy'll tell his friends "you should've saw how RD ate this man..
I'm surprised he has heart enough to show his face again!"

.
.
My 20 lines = 20 bullets, and they all sliced you and popped ya.
20 bullet holes in this fag........
it's gon be a long night for the doctors!

Marksmen. 11-10-06 01:11 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3104721
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236793
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3104742
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3104746

TEF 11-10-06 05:58 PM

ST. VAL

...Here's the snub faggit...
Read between the Brackets (YOUR SHIT)
The only time your gettin' cover is when your under the matress
^ONE OF THE FEW LINES THAT SOMEWHAT MADE SOME SENCE
PLUS NICE MULTI


VS

RAP D

Battle rapping, I should've gave you a chance to learn the shit.
cause beating you is 'no contest' like 'canceled tournaments'
^GOOD PUNCH
Slam and burn this bitch, you wasted ya time voting this week
keep ya eyes open, cause you about to get a KO in a blink!
^GOOD META
I'm sorry, but it's true... battling me'll get you beyond murked.
he's so whack, he's apart of the audience... at his own concert!
^I DON’T KNOW WHY, BUT THIS MADE ME LAFF
And don't worry about fame, you'll be well known in the street.
they'll say "Hey, aren't you the dude RD crushed last week?"
JUST A SLAP TO HIS FACE


V/ Rap D in a blow out

Not a lot I can futher explain

KempoMRK 11-11-06 05:31 AM

Up over no-shows.

R.Christensen 11-11-06 09:50 AM

Velentino was fucking horrible... nothing to remotely quote...

Rap came pretty weak... atleast most were average lines

well... that says it all

v/ Rap

fuck yuu 11-11-06 11:23 AM

nothing

vs

Battle rapping, I should've gave you a chance to learn the shit.
cause beating you is 'no contest' like 'canceled tournaments'
Slam and burn this bitch, you wasted ya time voting this week
keep ya eyes open, cause you about to get a KO in a blink!

Gotta give this to Rap.

Vote On The Contendorship Match

Valiant 11-11-06 04:09 PM

...Ok...So I guess I got raped...

Sonny Dimebags 11-11-06 11:31 PM

Rap Disciple-Battle rapping, I should've gave you a chance to learn the shit.
cause beating you is 'no contest' like 'canceled tournaments'
I talked to SL. about dope emcees, but he tried ways to stop it.
began talking about himself, and I said "can we please stay on topic?".....hottt

SL.Valentino-I battle Masters - not no fucking Disciple
Defeating you - brings to no gain to my title...Here's the snub faggit...
Read between the Brackets (YOUR SHIT)...ehhh

Well thsi battle was one sided kinda St. had some shit he juss has to set it up better so thats why Rap gets it had thenice line 2

Vote-Rap Disciple

Te Ora 11-11-06 11:39 PM

I talked to SL. about dope emcees, but he tried ways to stop it.
began talking about himself, and I said "can we please stay on topic?"

^ i think you WAY overdid the dialogue.. but this one was cool, set up well n everything. i wasn't really feeling the meta approach on the 'no competition' line. good potential tho dude.

vs. nothing


if shiest put as much time into thinking of punches as he did into formatting his verse he might've been ight lol.


v/ RD.

KempoMRK 11-12-06 08:19 AM

Rap Disciple wins 5-0.

Rap Disciple wins (2-0)
SL.Valentino loses (1-1)


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