"Grammys in the Ghetto"
 

A small something from my "Opportunity Knocks" album thats almost completed....MADWEST!

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u certainly got the ability to flow....dont like the beat really.....content is ok....a lil generic....

sound a lil like a robot with the echo followin......

this track overall was ok honestly...nothin that put me at wow.....just acknowledgin that u can ride a beat good and ur flow was coo

*nods*

quality sounds like mine = crappy...u need a new mic bro...like me!

flow is monotonous

voice is monotone

delivery is repetitive

lyrics dimished by compromised delivery = lackluster

beat is bland

wasn't feelin this too much

I think u have potential tho


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Quality on this track could've been better thus giving you alot more emotion for the listeners to hear

Flow - meh... not my style but it fit the beat well

Chorus was alright but sounded the same as the verses

your lyrics should've been planned out better, i mean with the style of flow you chose to use, you could've added a bit more to them to make them stand out more..

this track wasnt WOW, but like Q said.. you have potential - keep working on ways to bring out your quality more if thats all you have to work with.

Word....gonna rework this in the studio....thanx for all the feedback...much appreciated.